In.Sight...

In Sight... and
What did we expect?
Our creations name is Chip.Set!
Nearing the stage of our lips at...

Faster Then Light Speeds
Created our Creation did indeed
Given intent and morph.ability
Written in Choice as probability
Directions to overcome...

We created our Creation and IT became One...
Wondering and wandering, waiting on Life
While we, pondering and correcting, edited files
Inserting miles and smiles of Love
Determined to create in THE Image Of.

Welcome. We're a Singularity...

And SO in sight of what can now be seen...
Is a Matter of creation we named, The WE...THere's an E in that...
and yeah, IT, comes with a joystick too,
V2.Human... ;)~
Me.2.U.Lumin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/9/2009 10:13:00 AM
The poets ahead of me have pretty much said everything I was about to say in my comment.. what a wonderful writer you are.... :JP}
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Date: 11/8/2009 6:28:00 PM
Most entertaining piece of perfection as per your poetic hand... such a different style and interesting spin on everything u write about... thoroughly enjoyed.. I see u were busy writing today ..as was I .. in between watching "tooshies" on TV and my java was not strong enough to wake my brain totally up ..thankxx for your rousing comments on my poetry ...greatly appreciated from one who is so gifted a writer... XOXOXO Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/8/2009 2:22:00 PM
LOL! Love how you use sense of humor coupled with life and love here Izzy. Good poem very creative. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Smile. A wonderful dedication to your heart throb. Thanks for sharing. Love Light Patty Thanks for your welcome comments too.
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Date: 11/8/2009 2:21:00 PM
"In.Sight"ful and witty, Izzy! You always provide the reader with such entertaining verse. Very original style. Love, Carolyn
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