Insight

If love was all it took to succeed
 I woud be red oak instead of weed
 Committment, faithfulness feed
 Still through every fiber to all in need
 But we who walk the straight line
 Are the devoured ones you'll find.

 And each time left behind by one
 I am sure about, my fragment grows
 Less, a tree may grow in the sun
 Or wither unless some water flows
 Into the roots quiet, and deep
 Where all my secrets there I keep.

 This poem then is a fissure in the rock
 The churning magma will grow 
 Hard again, and tree rings like a clock
 Will tell but will not openly show
 The years that make xylem wood
 The tears that make the heart to brood.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Peranteau Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 2:29 PM
*smiles* sorry,...james,...tic in the digits
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May 6, 2009 at 2:27 PM
L'nass,...I had to go back in your time and see your words,.your write still poetical in time!,...I love your poetry,..and you can be assured,..I will enjoy reading the rest! jame
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