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If love was all it took to succeed I woud be red oak instead of weed Committment, faithfulness feed Still through every fiber to all in need But we who walk the straight line Are the devoured ones you'll find. And each time left behind by one I am sure about, my fragment grows Less, a tree may grow in the sun Or wither unless some water flows Into the roots quiet, and deep Where all my secrets there I keep. This poem then is a fissure in the rock The churning magma will grow Hard again, and tree rings like a clock Will tell but will not openly show The years that make xylem wood The tears that make the heart to brood.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/6/2009 2:29:00 PM
*smiles* sorry,...james,...tic in the digits
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Date: 5/6/2009 2:27:00 PM
L'nass,...I had to go back in your time and see your words,.your write still poetical in time!,...I love your poetry,..and you can be assured,..I will enjoy reading the rest! jame
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