Insidious Mission

Singing in a chorus requires precision The cats cannot do that it was my vision My thought was inverted I was booed and carted As they finished this insidious mission. CONTEST 225 any form,any topic max of 10 lines - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Jan Allison

Date: 10/18/2016 12:18:00 PM

talk about a cats chorus lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 10/18/2016 9:29:00 AM

A chorus of singing cats//would likely drive one bats//reverse the thought//you might get caught//harmonizing with rats. // Enjoyed pondering your lim'rik! I wonder if anyone has tried to train cats to sing (howl?) in unison? Hmmm... ;-) cheers ~ j

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 10/18/2016 11:24:00 AM

I enjoyed your lim.We had a hell of a lot of rats in our house and they had the habit of disharmonizing our lives.I think cats are better, more civilized.Love John.