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Inside Your Parenthesis

I keep your facial poses under lock with myself as the only key so I may live in your parenthesis. You wished to be a solid color, but were a pattern of unique luster. If a creek, you would have swollen, if a cloud, you would have burst, yet still, I thirst for you often. You no longer weave me safe blankets or shadow battle against my problems. With constant ache I miss your blossom. My pain cries for a permanent solving! I live fondest imagining your punctuation and often unlock, with a tear to hasten, your gone phrasing for my joys encasing. ... CayCay Jennings March 15, 2017

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Date: 6/3/2018 5:26:00 PM
Hello CayCay, a very clever poem, well written. You have a wonderful gift for expression, deserved win, kindest regards, Kevin x
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Date: 6/4/2018 8:59:00 AM
Your comments touched me so I had to tell you so and thank you, Kevin. All the best to you and your muse ... CayCay
Date: 5/20/2018 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win CayCay. I especially appreciated the line “and often unlock, with a tear to hasten”. Thank you.
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Date: 5/20/2018 8:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this.
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Date: 5/20/2018 6:21:00 AM
A moving poem, CayCay. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/20/2018 4:40:00 AM
Congratulations, CayCay on your win. Beautifully penned.
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Date: 3/30/2017 8:32:00 AM
A sweet caring write.
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Date: 3/20/2017 12:28:00 AM
Beautifully done... thanks for sharing..
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Date: 3/17/2017 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations CayCay...
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Date: 3/16/2017 7:29:00 PM
CayCay, your poem movingly conveys the theme of love--and how it has its extremes, mostly good. Congrats on your placement! Janice
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Date: 3/16/2017 6:52:00 PM
Oh CayCay- where do I start. The title amazes me just as much as the poem. So much depth and emotion in these verses, I am so grateful to have read it!!! thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 3/16/2017 5:15:00 PM
I find myself reacting to your contrasting emotions, CayCay. A uniquely titled poem and overall expressive content. You have the ability to make good use of that special key...! Regards // paul
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Date: 3/15/2017 6:36:00 PM
WOW!!! CayCay, the title drew me in and the first stanza...well....love it. Well done.
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Date: 3/15/2017 6:12:00 PM
I am sure this poem will do well CayCay. Who wouldn't love the beauty of this expression....how they articulate meaning or the song these words sing? Your words penetrate a soul's depth! Lovely and a fave! ; ) 7
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