Inside This Tiny Chamber

let me be the shadow cast
from the soft fade of light borrowed
as in a storm
inside this chest,
lightning flash
splits me open
and have you wake 
inside this tiny chamber
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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June 4, 2012 at 3:32 PM
Hello,Robert I don't know how to say it;but its awesome!Today I'm reading poems from my aunt PD's account, hope you don't mind. Sincerely pd's niece SYLVIA}i{
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June 4, 2012 at 3:40 PM
thanks! thats cool -as long as its ok with PD!
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June 4, 2012 at 6:25 AM
"Very intence... and Sharpe thank you for sharig on the soup!! Carma"
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June 4, 2012 at 1:35 PM
thanks!
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