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Inside Out

An introvert in isolation Talked to fairies in desperation Not even quit faint So neighbours complained Called Police for incarceration An extrovert shut up and inside Climbed into tupperware as his guide Held in detention He gained contention But then the lid was dissatisfied 28th April

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Becky Forbes

Date: 9/27/2022 8:51:00 AM

Love it! "But then the lid was dissatisfied" Brilliant.

Becky Forbes
Date: 9/27/2022 3:21:00 PM

But that is the point, is it not? To outgrow successive lids... Just love the way you brought the lid's perspective :-)

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 9/27/2022 10:43:00 AM

Thank you. The thing with the lids is that there are always not matching with the containers. Bit like the bachelor socks.