Notes About The Poem

Inside On the Outside

lost in greenery
out of the house for a day
gazebo breezes
in midst of blooming summer
underneath the singing trees

sitting on sunshine
before the sweet crimson hour
in summer's fun house
in a universe of stars
outside of icy winter

on the edge of bliss
and thankful for God's goodness
in a jasmine year
butterflies hummingbirds scents
excitement for the senses
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Wolf Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 1:46 PM
Nothing like those gazebo breezes. I just love them. Wish there were more in the Chicago area... :)
Buehler Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 3:07 PM
They're a great place to read, listen to music, or just relax-all the while enjoying nature and life. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 11:09 PM
Who would not feel the excitement of such nature's gifts? Loved your poem. ~~
Buehler Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 7:51 AM
Nature certainly enriches life. Thank you. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 6:51 PM
So much lovely imagery! Love the singing trees!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 6:01 AM
I’ll stand there with you and hear them too! God bless!
Buehler Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 7:36 PM
I listen to them often. Thank you, Kim. :=)
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