Inside of Us

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Inside of us We all have our thoughts inside of our heads And a heart that lies there beneath our breast A pair of lungs so we breathe in and out A tongue to talk with inside of our mouth. We've a skeleton to keep us upright Fingers abled to work, hold and to write Arms flexible for to bend and to reach Energy to put stride in legs and feet. We've so many extraordinary things The Lord God above thought of everything The one thing we can put inside ourself Is love and love is what makes all things well. 7th March 2021

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Alexis Y.

Date: 3/8/2021 10:29:00 AM

WoW! Belle, What a positive and encouraging write. I agree the Lord put everything we need inside of us. I think love lies dormant inside of us until we feel it and know it. I enjoyed this write very much. I'm adding to my fav collection. Have a wonderful day;-) Alexis

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/8/2021 11:22:00 AM

Thank you Alexis, it’s simply amazing how we were created, with every part of us working together, love is the gift that we choose to let in. Have a lovey day, what’s left of it. Belle :-)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/8/2021 7:35:00 AM

Yes, we do have so many blessings Belle. :) Love inside to understand and bestow compassion. Linda

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/8/2021 11:19:00 AM

So many blessings it’s too many to count - thank you Linda, very much ~ Belle

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/7/2021 8:07:00 AM

Well expressed! Blessings Rick.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/8/2021 11:18:00 AM

Thank you and bless you Rick ~ Belle

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/7/2021 1:19:00 AM

I think God gave us all the love we need, it's just we don't always care. owe ignore others.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/7/2021 1:24:00 AM

Very true Victor, God gave us the gift of love, accept it or not, it’s up to us... Belle

Angela Crabtree

Date: 3/6/2021 6:44:00 PM

A beautiful and descriptive poem, Belle. Yes, love makes all things well. Hope you're having a wonderful weekend :)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/6/2021 6:54:00 PM

Enjoying a lovely weekend, hope you are too. Thank you very much Angela for reading and commenting. Belle