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Inside of Me

I hear the echoes of a sound so far away I just don’t understand a single word they say... I move closer so that I can better hear, But when I do they always disappear… I see the traces of a picture I have dreamed But when I looked it isn’t what it seemed Cause every time I made the colors flow.. I’m left with nothing but an empty show I looked and looked and there at last I found… A wondrous place with lots of wondrous sound, There I have found the truth that set me free… It wasn’t far, it’s just inside of me...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/23/2016 12:19:00 PM
nice to see this one again, Eeva. LINDA
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Date: 2/1/2015 8:56:00 PM
Very beautiful!
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Date: 1/31/2015 9:08:00 AM
Thanks for the warm welcome everyone!Will browse the site and get to know you all. :)
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Date: 1/31/2015 1:51:00 AM
Eeva, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Eeva Lancaster
Date: 1/31/2015 9:10:00 AM
Will check out the contests Linda. Thanks for the awesome welcome. :)
Date: 1/31/2015 12:50:00 AM
Eeva, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Eeva Lancaster
Date: 1/31/2015 9:09:00 AM
Big Hug Skat! Certainly is a warm group... :)
Date: 1/29/2015 2:46:00 PM
I still hear the beautiful ecoes of life and love, of your beautiful inner world.Congrat.
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Eeva Lancaster
Date: 1/31/2015 9:09:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 1/26/2015 12:37:00 PM
- A warm welcome to the P Soup, Eeva :) - Hope it will come many more poems from you in the future - Enjoy reading your first, a very well written poem - // Anne-Lise :)
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Eeva Lancaster
Date: 1/31/2015 9:11:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise. This is an excerpt from my first published ebook, In Loving You. :) See ya round the site.
Date: 1/25/2015 4:03:00 PM
We all need to look beyond the reflection in the mirror, deeper inside and find the beauty there within. I really enjoyed your poem.
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Eeva Lancaster
Date: 1/25/2015 4:22:00 PM
Thank you Timothy.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things