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This is also inspired by the wonderful gift that came to me last week from a complete stranger who put the words of my poem Honeymoon Serenade to music. A big thanks to Ryan Lucas, marvelous musician and singer, who came to me as a stranger with one of the best birthday gifts I ever received.  

Also, am I the only one who is always hearing radio songs in my head every day??

Inside My Head

Inside my head, I sometimes hear a song:
Often it is one that I have heard before.
Just one song only, playing all day long,
turning off, then on; I do not know what for!
A special song for each day,which I cannot ignore.

Yes, each day it seems a different tune takes wing
to flutter in my brain so tirelessly.
This tune will take a rest while I am focusing
on matters of importance; furthermore, the melody
that I keep hearing might some other day revisit me!

My time each morning driving, singing to the radio
is the start of this phenomenon. 
One tune will stay with me as into work I go.
It's possible by evening it could well be gone,
then restart at bedtime or reappear at dawn!

Last week there came to me a lovely tune -
A gift to me from a musician. It has stayed
for several days with me. I hope it won’t be leaving soon
The words inside my head entwining with the tune he made
are the very lyrics that I penned - my own sweet serenade!

WRitten By andrea dietrich, 9/14/2015 and posted 9/16/2015 for a contest that closed before Oct. 
For  Trashed #2 Poetry Contest, sponsor, Broken Wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A  Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 10:04 PM
Andrea, Congrats on your trashed #2 win. SKAT <3
Romaine Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 10:04 AM
Hey Andrea, a hearty congratulations on your poem winning placement in BW's contest. It is a wonderful piece and I also hear music constantly. Keep sharing with us. Be Blessed, Neva
Cheema Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 11:24 AM
We often keep on humming songs, sometimes the same song the whole day. Loved the whole effect of your poem! Love, Balveen
A. Sharma Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 3:11 AM
Congrats on a wonderful win Andrea! Wonder how such a beautiful poem got trashed in any contest?
Lindley Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 10:14 PM
Congrats Andrea on this fine poem winning. Your poem and the poem/song set to music that gave it life are both winners.
Lindley Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 10:13 PM
Congrats Andrea on this fine poem winning. Your poem and the poem/song set to music that gave it life are both winners.
Godwin Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 6:24 PM
This is indeed a theme we can all relate to. I am thrilled that your words turned into a lifetime memory - I don't think you'll ever forget that gift. Congratulations on your win ... CayCay
Haight Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 3:21 PM
Congratulations, Andrea. Nice to see your excellent poem on the winner's list! Sandra
Allison Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 2:47 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs jan Do keep us posted about your poem set to Ryan's music:-) hugs jan xx
Richards Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 12:08 PM
You must be singing praise after being so rewarded !! Another great win, Andrea!! Congrats to you!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 26, 2015 at 6:30 PM
Yep, I read this one too. I think I have read all your poems now Andrea. Hope you are having a great weekend?
Inman Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 9:25 PM
Very nice, Andrea.
Walker Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 10:52 AM
Now if only others can take that song and have it in their heads too. What a great gift from God you have to express your thoughts in words.
Devnath  Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 12:41 PM
Wow! it's an excellent poem about happening in side head after hearing a loving song for many days continuously. It's real and happens. You have done so beautifully that is exceptional too. 7 and loved always my smiling beautiful friend, bl
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 2:34 AM
One day your Honeymoon Serenade will be on the radio I predict Andrea. It was no mistake you received that gift on your birthday...It was a little gift from the man upstairs I would imagine! This is a lovely thank you penned for Ryan. Hope it does well in the contest. Congrats on your wonderful news Andrea! 7
Wigley Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 11:31 PM
A lovely write for a lovely present, Andrea. Nothing wrong with music in your head- it's cheaper than an iPod and you won't go deaf in old age. Viv x
A   Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 8:55 PM
Not a bad thought. Good going Andrea. Keep up the good work. Your muse id awesome. Pd
Babcock Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 7:05 PM
That was such a special gift to you. I love this poem and yes we get tunes in our head that stay with us all day. You now have a song that is your very own. How nice is that. love phyl
Dietrich Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 10:19 PM
thanks, sweetie. Let me see if you posted a new poem for me to see.
Anish Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 5:39 PM
Very nice! I also hear songs in my head many days. My father mad "art songs" out of 8 of my poems. My nephew is setting one of my poems - "Demon,Demon" to rock music. I am glad to see your work get more exposure. Keep up the good work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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September 16, 2015 at 3:51 PM
Beautiful write Andrea.... aaaahhh.. music that keeps repeating itself.. or music that brings a memory flooding back. Wonderful take on an interesting competition title. I wrote a poem called "EARWORMS" on the topic of music that gets stuck in ones head. #7 ~~X~~
Austin Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 1:12 PM
For sure. I've written on this theme too - a tune that keeps playing in your head. Sometimes you're not even conscious of it, but with just a moment of silence here it is again. Love this one. Love, daver
Parker Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 10:02 AM
You may have missed your calling my friend, musicians say they hear music in their heads a lot of the time..I know a lot of your poetry has a musical flow to it.. good luck in the contest
Ober Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 9:13 AM
It's been ages since I read a quintain. Very creative write - Love that ending!! :)
Trifiatis Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 5:16 AM
This phenomenon happens to me as well, dear Andrea. Each day has its own rhythm and melody that harmonize with the vibration of our soul. It gives us the tune which we have to follow for happiness to be achieved. A wonderful, melodious and harmonic poem!
Allison Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 5:07 AM
Such fabulous news Andrea and a great poem off the back of this amazing 'gift':-) hugs jan xx
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