Inside My Eyes

I’m growing old inside my eyes.
Through that lens I cannot disguise.
She saw them today while magnifying.
Tiny cataracts is what she was spying.
Emma the optician must be lying.

I’m growing old within my knees.
When I struggle to rise please don’t tease.
Getting down is fine to light the fire.
Only now I wish the range was higher.
Being watched makes me even shyer.

Im growing old but feeling fine.
Now relaxing I type as I recline.
No more worries with work stress.
Old age really is the best 
antidote to being young.

Sometimes it’s even a lot more fun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 6/3/2023 3:55:00 AM
wise thoughts indeed Jean:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/30/2022 5:01:00 PM
I hope you are right. Love it Jean
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Jean Murray
Date: 2/19/2023 3:55:00 PM
Hello again Mark. I remember you were one of the first who encouraged me here. I hope all is good with you. Sorry I did not see this sooner and thank you for stopping by.
Date: 8/1/2022 6:01:00 PM
I shattered every mirror in my house. I'm glad that you are feeling fine...Who said old age is really good, I will send all of my mirrors to his house.
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Date: 8/5/2022 3:35:00 AM
Don’t do that Pashang. “Beauty is only sin deep.” The mirrors cannot reflect the heart and soul. Nice to hear from you. You certainly sound like you’re live and kickin’.
Date: 7/4/2022 10:33:00 AM
A positive attitude is the way to cope, Jean, and you seem to have one. Fun write to read.
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Date: 7/4/2022 3:28:00 PM
Thank you Jenna. My eldest brother and I were recently counting our blessings and how wonderful it is to just sit back now and enjoy them.
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