Alan Jeeves Poet Couplet

Inside a Darkened Room

A darkened room knows no sorrow
No today and no tomorrow;
A darkened room has no sadness
It has no pain, only madness.

A darkened room has no light
Has no moon or starlight bright;
A darkened room has no shine
Has no lustre, yours or mine.

A darkened room has no good
Has no heartbeat, has no blood;
A darkened room has no breath
Has no life but only death.

A darkened room has no style
Has no simper, has no smile;
A darkened room has no grin
Has no easiness within.

A darkened room has no day
Has no notion, has no say;
A darkened room has no eve
Has no reason to believe.

A darkened room has no PC
It has no he or has no she;
A darkened room has no view
Has no me and has no you.

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Jo Chamberlain May 19, 2022 at 2:27 AM Just brilliant! I really enjoyed your poem. I particularly enjoyed the opening stanza, you had me intrigued. Nicely penned. Alan Jeeves May 19, 2022 at 5:22 AM Thank you Joanna, I am so pleased that you enjoyed 'Darkened Room'. I appreciate your wonderful comment. Kind regards, Alan