Insecurities

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In the shadowed corners of my thoughts, In a whisper, not heard, l i n g e r s— unseen by the eye but felt. A tremor under my skin, a pulse of doubt's steady march, where questions collide with silence, I own rooms in these echo chambers which contain scattered dreams Sometimes in what seems like perpetual night.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/18/2025 8:03:00 PM

This is deep, Sara. It works for me on both a physical, intellectual, and spiritual level. Thanks, gw

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/19/2025 4:06:00 AM

So glad it works so well for you, Gershon. Since my mother died (committed suicide) when I was only 15 months old and in 3 months I was adopted, I understand insecurities completely. Thanks for dropping by. Sara K

Anne Winter

Date: 6/17/2025 7:59:00 PM

Nicely penned! So many insecurities always knocking on the door of my head.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/18/2025 4:25:00 AM

Life can issue us insecurities for sure, Anne. We can only work on one at a time with the help of Jesus Christ. Thanks for the nice review of my work. Sara K

David Crandall

Date: 6/16/2025 7:23:00 PM

I can relate to nagging insecurities - well expressed!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/17/2025 5:38:00 AM

Why, thank you, David for the kind review. I think we all have them from time to time. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/16/2025 1:28:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Insecurities" write. Have a fun day writing away..........

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/16/2025 2:02:00 PM

Thank you, Paula. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Tom Woody

Date: 6/16/2025 11:21:00 AM

Well well, this is certainly outside your usual comfort range and I have to say it's quite good. Kudos for stretching

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/16/2025 1:24:00 PM

Why, thank you, Tom. Yes, not like me but I do write like this sometimes. Sara K