Arden Gopela Poet Free verse

Insecure's Game

Big head; slimmed shape
                                  Short-legged; fat belly
                          Out of proportion; feeling crumpy
                               A man uncertain of "BEAUTY".

                                Out of envy, he pulls down
                        Other success, brings him disgrace
                  Reputation's ruined when someone's able
              Crabs in the bucket towards their "ACHIEVEMENT".

                         Brought into life with no posession
                                  While others have gold
                        Punished to hunger and discomfort
                          When others plenty with no effort
                         Always dreaming of that, "one day"
                                    But lazy and untimely
                                Annoyed with other's gain
                                He killed due to "WEALTH".

                                Are you deprived of a life?
                               You're anxious at all times
                   Clouded by doubts; rejection by the crowd.
                           
                               If you're equal with anyone
                                With body, soul and mind
                              Time to feel something good
                           Cultivate a new self and a future.

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Scott Thirtyseven November 1, 2013 at 1:54 AM I've read a few of yours tonight. This one is my fav. well done. Arden Gopela November 1, 2013 at 2:16 AM Hi there, Scott! Thanks for taking time reading some of my pieces! Happy that this one's your favorite. I appreciate that Scott! Nice to meet another Souper-Friend here! Bless you! Love,love,love! :-) - Den

Karen Anglesey October 31, 2013 at 8:15 AM Enjoyed this well composed and enlightening gem. Very wise and inspiring :) Arden Gopela October 31, 2013 at 7:31 PM Nice to hear that, Karen! That's pleasant to the ear! Bless you and take care! Love,love,love! :-) - Den

Mark Peterson October 30, 2013 at 8:07 PM So well phrased and written. The poem's message reminds of words from an old Joni Mitchell song: "You know the times you impress me most are the time you don't try." Mark Arden Gopela October 31, 2013 at 6:41 AM Thanks, Mark! I appreciate your words! Congrats for being on the top list for the best new poets here! Bless you! Love,love,love! :-) - Den

Jake Ponce October 30, 2013 at 11:02 AM Envy brings nothing but ruin. No wonder it belongs to the seven deadly sins. Great piece, Arden. :) Arden Gopela October 31, 2013 at 6:48 AM You're very right, Jake! With insecurities and envy, the end-result will always be destruction to one self and to others! We just have to be proud of their success at all times and be nice to everyone! Bless you my friend! Love,love,love! :-) - Den

Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2013 at 4:54 AM - Very well written Arden !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Arden Gopela October 30, 2013 at 6:09 AM Thanks, Anne! Take care always! Love,love,love! :-) - Den

Arden Gopela October 30, 2013 at 1:19 AM A reason to feel insecure is a reason to lose hope and a future. We're created distinct to one another! We have something that others dont. We should always look on what we have for us to feel that we, too, are blessed. There's a lot of reason to celebrate about ourselves. Love,love,love! :-)