Insecure Love

You should be rueful for the nature you hold…
Which seems now to be like impure gold…
It seems you are unmindful of the bond of chum…
Thought of your dumb mind left me numb…

Don’t see this in the mind’s eye as “Love in the Air”…
Because it’s just a pious link of friendship and Care…
It seems you are unmindful of the bond of chum…
Thought of your dumb mind left me numb…

Aren’t you fond of this friendship season…?
Stop making fuss outta this without any reason…
It seems you are unmindful of the bond of chum…
Thought of your dumb mind left me numb…

So many years of love and so many years of trust and bond…
What is wrong in hanging out with the chums “I fond”…?
It seems you are unmindful of the bond of chum…
Thought of your dumb mind left me numb…

I know you love, but you can’t always stand by as a guard…
I am now an adult and I know how to go beyond the yard…
It seems you are unmindful of the bond of chum…
Thought of your dumb mind left me numb…

I sense this is an art of an insecure connection….
It showcases the bond of our love as imperfection…
It seems you are unmindful of the bond of chum…
Thought of your dumb mind left me numb…

By Gautam
29th Oct 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/30/2015 11:38:00 AM
Dear Gautam, well... your poem has clearly expressed the pain love brings at some point in everyone's life....love hurts sometimes but dearth of love hurts even more......i liked your selection of words....the poet has poured his heart out through this poem...a 7! for the feel....Love, Anu:)
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad