Insects' buzzing

Gazing at the transgressive, monotonous (yet awake) mundane-
burning cheeks, bottles empty of holy blood
accompanied by slurred atonement lost in soft wind
persevered; untainted discovery by foolish hopes and dreams
cleansed the heavy mind -so long ago-
(absorbed by a double cornered blue piece
forced by trembling, febrile fingers onto a middle, 
claustrophobic gap in the puzzle.
The same calloused fingers left the piece fall onto 
tarnished tranquility and stone grass below...
the puzzle followed shortly after.)

While clouded heaven mirrored into precious jewels,
supposedly suppressed insects' buzzing swirled into murky abyss,
sojourned into presumably bright surface
creating crass, frustrating bruit,
as haunting salvation and self induced divine commitment 
tried to coerce only to be swiftly swapped 
by the animalistic surviving instinct 
mistaken with prideful self-controlling nature.

Adverted, hazy scrutiny wandered off prosaic cacophony
whilst cold, pristine, heavenly blanket
hid the fallen form from noisome stares...
Crimson flooded, trembling, twitching limbs
reached weakly to the faint bloodied heaven
reflected onto cheap emeralds;
only the gelid and chast dare to purge them.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Agustin Avatar
February 24, 2024 at 5:07 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Darcy Avatar
February 24, 2024 at 6:42 AM
Thank you very much
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