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Inscription upon the Horizon

I heard the sound of the sea echoing like a distant hymn. It encompassed my soul like a heavenly embrace. It set me free like a lucid breeze. It was like a speech of a father: a timeless speech that never bores; once a cold, majestic surf; the other, a patient silence that frees my heart from all sorrow I looked around and found no sea; I found your emerald eyes smiling as you were uttering my name, I listened closely as if my name were a new song, an eloquent piece; and I got lost in anticipation as if my name were just about to be inscribed upon the horizon.

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Date: 1/6/2024 1:12:00 PM
Your poem is a mesmerizing journey into the depths of sensory experience and emotional resonance. The comparison of the sea's sound to a distant hymn creates an ethereal atmosphere, echoing a heavenly embrace that sets the soul free like a lucid breeze. The imagery of the sea as a timeless speech, alternating between a cold, majestic surf and a patient silence, beautifully mirrors the ebb and flow of emotions...
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