Inscape

The night sky that bade us bye
as the morning hue demystified;
that the stars had an hallucinating effect
eyes dilating to the heart's affect.

And now it beats and beats
like a babbling brook
like the rustling dunes
like the glistening chocolate mountains.

It feels so much and yet naught
it sees so much, all sought!
It breathes so much, breathless
senses, senseless...

And now the heart pounds 
and now I shut my eyes
little drops, rainbow like
metamorphosed into a
beauty glistening down.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Kimathi Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 6:33 AM
I agree with Darren, that's a lovely imagery! Congrats Aakriti, for having your work featured in the PoetrySoup homepage!! :-)
Jain Avatar
July 9, 2017 at 2:51 AM
Thanks so much. Keep readin' and filling your soul.
White Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 1:23 AM
Beautiful imagery, you paint a picture for me with your words. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
Jain Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 12:53 PM
Thanks so much. The encouragement is heartily appreciated.
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