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3/2/2025 for Write Two Beautiful Lines of Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France

Insanity's Bouquet

“I loved her against reason, against promise, against peace, against hope, against happiness, against all discouragement that could be” ~ Pip in Great Expectations by Charles Dickens

I'm all in pieces, in sad disarray, 
holding your gift, insanity's bouquet.
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Dietrich Avatar
March 10, 2025 at 3:38 PM
Wow. This is superb.
Crandall Avatar
March 10, 2025 at 3:40 PM
Why, thanks Andrea!
Andresen Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 2:03 AM
- Beautiful lines David, congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
Crandall Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 9:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise!
Greenhough Avatar
March 4, 2025 at 6:28 AM
Ha ha. I wouldn't feel guilty throwing this bouquet away. I smile.
Crandall Avatar
March 4, 2025 at 3:41 PM
Good point - who would want that!
Rodgers Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 9:43 AM
Hello David, How hauntingly raw and beautifully evocative. The imagery of being "all in pieces" and holding "insanity's bouquet" speaks volumes about inner turmoil and fragility. Your words always leave me thinking deeply. Spring Blesssings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Crandall Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 11:36 AM
Thanks Daniel, those are nice words to hear - happy Spring! In reading your poems, I think you are always thinking deeply!
Rose  Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 2:54 AM
Oh David, your the poet of all poets, and I love your poetry, have a blessed day dear poet !
Crandall Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 9:32 AM
Thanks Mystic Rose, what a wonderful compliment! Have a great day - nice and sunny here in SoCal!
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