Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Insane Saturday Traffic

Traffic on a Saturday morning in the big city
Insanity describes it well or really quite shitty
There's mucho angst
Everyone's a crank
Each morning we need to take a loosen up pill

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Michael Tor October 17, 2017 at 11:41 AM So true my friend all in a hurry to get nowhere.. Jack Ellison October 17, 2017 at 11:50 AM And usually succeed...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 17, 2017 at 8:44 AM T.O. Traffic is insane! Pills might help lol xomo Gooood morning Jack! Jack Ellison October 17, 2017 at 9:13 AM And I live in Newmarket, 40 miles north of the big city!!!! xxx

Lim'Rik Flats October 17, 2017 at 8:16 AM Indeed, I've no more power//to endure the daily rush hour//I plan my trips//for rush-hour skips//or else I get a bit sour. LOOSEN UP JACQUESAN!!! Are loosen up pills legal? ;-) Jack Ellison October 17, 2017 at 9:15 AM We have no breaks... well unless we shop at 10 minutes before closing!!!!! ARE THERE SUCH PILLS!!!