Insane Rose

I'd like to dedicate this Acrostic to you.
Now you I appreciate, but here's a clue.
So journey with me to a place of pure bliss.
Answer my poetry, and I'll give you a poetic kiss!
Notice my creativity comes from mi corazon.
Enter heaven with me, and I'll never leave you alone!

Remember, love is the ultimate truth, all else is a lie.
Ordinarily it would take more that a woman's words to satisfy.
So unselfishly I give you a nice piece of me.
Eternally we will be, if you just follow the words in my poetry!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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November 12, 2011 at 9:18 AM
insanerose hears your corazon, and to let you know that i offer much amor, this a beautiful poem and insane is what i am with thorns of a rose, could be in your hand, so be careful my friend what it is you presive because like you i was in great misery, I love with my heart and to be honest we'd love eachother apart, hope to hear from you soon, xoxo :))
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June 10, 2011 at 3:19 AM
Nicely done, with some words of wisdom too! Love is the most powerful thing in the universe! Regards, Robert.
Wilson Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 3:51 PM
very nice acrostic,well written Jimmy! love,Deb
Song Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 7:41 PM
If you called me insane G...., I don't think it would be a technique to gain affection. ha ha . This is cleverly written and somewhat enticing, almost like a game. Hope Rose likes this. Much enjoyed. Gwendolen
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