Insane

Even though you think I'm trying
Inside I'm slowly dying.
When all I feel is pain,
I think I've gone insane. 
I tried to make it right,
I'm tired of this fight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Nwaorgu Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 2:19 AM
This is simply wonderful; rich in touchy rhymes, sole feeling and expression; Keep writing. Cheers. Timothy Paker
Andresen Avatar
February 28, 2012 at 12:44 PM
You did the right....well done poem Danielle!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
Brown Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 6:01 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Danielle. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 12:29 PM
What wonderful poetry you all are sharing with us today. I have enjoyed reading yours today Danielle. I hope the rest of the week finds you with much inspiration in your heart and you will continue to share your writing. Love, Carol
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February 22, 2012 at 1:07 AM
Perfectly written, and good luck! The fight is over!
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