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Insane

Even though you think I'm trying Inside I'm slowly dying. When all I feel is pain, I think I've gone insane. I tried to make it right, I'm tired of this fight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/1/2012 2:19:00 AM
This is simply wonderful; rich in touchy rhymes, sole feeling and expression; Keep writing. Cheers. Timothy Paker
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Date: 2/28/2012 12:44:00 PM
You did the right....well done poem Danielle!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/27/2012 6:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Danielle. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/22/2012 12:29:00 PM
What wonderful poetry you all are sharing with us today. I have enjoyed reading yours today Danielle. I hope the rest of the week finds you with much inspiration in your heart and you will continue to share your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/22/2012 1:07:00 AM
Perfectly written, and good luck! The fight is over!
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