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Ins and Outs

This is what life’s all about: We barrel in and totter out. Along the way, we smile or pout And try our best to conquer doubt. We may be rebels or devout, Remain unnoticed or have clout, Yet we survive, in flood or drought, Our whispers rising to a shout As we fight in our final bout; Then, like a candle, fizzle out.

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Date: 1/17/2023 11:41:00 AM
Delightful monorhyme ~ lovely message, Ilene.
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Date: 1/17/2023 8:41:00 AM
And barrel into something new
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Date: 1/14/2023 7:17:00 PM
How true this is a Favorite...
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Date: 1/14/2023 9:45:00 AM
The rhythm of life. Enjoyed your thought and the rhyme of it :) Hi Ilene
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Date: 1/13/2023 6:46:00 AM
I am enoying these end rhymes
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Date: 1/11/2023 7:12:00 PM
Happy Fizzle Party! ... And yet, there is that final leap of the flame...
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Date: 1/11/2023 4:40:00 PM
Words of wisdom, so beautifully put. it sums up life in a "nutshell". Ilene I am making a special place for this one in my favorites list.
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Date: 1/11/2023 1:49:00 PM
This allegory should begin with the word "In". Always a pleasure.
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