Inquiry From the Dead

What’s taking you so long? “We are all waiting for you”

Just these words, I hear each night in my sleep, in my dreams
I wake up to find I’m standing by the bedroom door
But how did I get here, walking in my sleep, it seems

What’s taking you so long? ‘We are all waiting for you”

It echoes faster now, they masterfully implore
These words of whispered urgency stuck inside my head
As I awake this time, lying on the kitchen floor

Finally, a night it seems, that rest and peace prevail

I’m traveling, a journey, I’m seated in my car
Funny, I’m not moving, though I hear the engine roar
The garage is dark; the door is closed, then from afar

What took you so long, my friend? “We’ve been waiting for you”




Written for Halloween Scare
10/1/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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November 9, 2017 at 11:09 PM
Sleep walking is a scary thing for me. It runs in my family. Found my daughter screaming in the van in the garage one night and she had no idea how she got there. Talk about scary!
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November 10, 2017 at 11:04 AM
WOW, I've never really known anyone who has really experienced, It must be scary for sure!
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November 9, 2017 at 10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Mike - keep up the great writing! :-)
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November 10, 2017 at 11:04 AM
Thank you so much Gregory, I certainly appreciate you encouragement!!
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October 1, 2017 at 2:56 PM
between alpha and beta stages, sleep or fantasy spawn... remarkable poem. mike.. huggs
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October 1, 2017 at 3:46 PM
Thanks so much, Nette xxoo
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October 1, 2017 at 11:17 AM
Wow, quite a write! A dreamlike sequence. Enjoyed!
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October 1, 2017 at 12:06 PM
Thanks Kim
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October 1, 2017 at 7:42 AM
Beyond the playful Scaring Halloween, your theme, verses, talent are genuine ones. Despite their political orientation/ failure, Giovanni Gentile and Martin Heidegger reach the moral territory and had such similar Inquiry. The King Valley from Egypt may underline the Ecclesiastic clever meditation: Fear of God and you will have no many mistakes. Surat 3 from Koran, wishful thinking on Karma , Yoga, Hindi and Buddhism urge to good acts, thoughts and words, good fellowship along life and hope.
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October 1, 2017 at 7:53 AM
Thank you so much, Ovidiu, for your thought provoking comments !
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