Innocent Questions

My little sister was back home from school
Today she had questions deep as a tidal pool

Did I do something wrong? Why don’t I have a tail?
All the animals do. I’m sad, it leaves me pale

If trees live like we do, why don’t they walk?
Why did God punish trees? Why can’t they talk?

Why does an elephant have such a big nose?
Why can’t I follow a butterfly, fly as it goes?

Why is a notice called circular, if it’s rectangular in shape?
Why are old time queens famous for having grapes?

Why do giraffes have such a long neck?
Why do woodpeckers do nothing but peck?

Why do cuckoos lay eggs in a crow’s nest?
Hey please answer my questions, so I can ask you the rest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/19/2012 7:03:00 AM
Thanking you today for your comments on my writing Apoorva. I hope you have a very pleasant weekend and I wish to see more of your work next week. Love, Carol XXXX
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Date: 10/7/2012 10:47:00 AM
Apoorva, congrats on your win with this cute poem! Love, Kim
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Date: 10/5/2012 6:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Susan's contest Apoorva. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/4/2012 8:01:00 PM
Love this poem Apoorva!Congrats on the win.
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Date: 10/4/2012 1:20:00 PM
We all wonder about these things but only the innocent little ones will ask. Very enjoyable. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/4/2012 12:46:00 AM
I've really enjoyed reading your winning piece, Apoorva. I really like those innocent questions making me smile reading it up to the end. MY HUGE HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN!!! love/hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 10/3/2012 2:13:00 PM
Apoorva, congratulations In Susan's "Any poem under 14 lines" contest. Had fun reading all her winners. take care~ PD
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Date: 10/3/2012 12:32:00 PM
Cute poem - congratulations.
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Date: 10/3/2012 10:28:00 AM
nice one apoorva, kids hey, they are fantastic xx
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Date: 10/3/2012 9:59:00 AM
Congrats on your win...nice write!!!
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Date: 10/3/2012 9:15:00 AM
Great, funny poem... Congratulations on your win! Terry
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Date: 10/3/2012 8:45:00 AM
Congratulations friend Apoorva for winning the contest. It’s beautifully written poem. Cheers!!!!!!!!!(^_^) Maria
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Date: 9/15/2012 2:28:00 PM
Great write,excellen queries.
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Date: 9/6/2012 3:24:00 PM
Humor thru the musings of God's great big creation!Wonderful couplets....I wonder why woodpeckers do nothing more than peck!!! Interesting questions to pose! gwendolen
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/7/2012 10:39:00 AM
thanks!
Date: 9/4/2012 5:30:00 AM
YOur little sister is TOO curious. hahaha. This is a fun poem. TEll your sister to go google all this stuff and leave you alone! Meanwhile this made for some good humor!!
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/6/2012 6:44:00 AM
thankyou :)
Date: 9/3/2012 6:48:00 PM
A very thoughtful poem.
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/6/2012 6:43:00 AM
thankyou :)
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