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Innocent Lie

First met, felt nothing Tricks in his eyes were warning He snatched my body

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James Peranteau

Date: 2/11/2015 2:38:00 PM

Yikes ! A bit on the alarming don't ya think ! A great write dear poet for the young souls that for sure ! TY for sharing this profound write Elai. Have a blessed week........much love, james.......soup mail

Elai Cee
Date: 4/13/2015 10:54:00 AM

yeah James Happy to see you here :) hihi

Honestly J.T.

Date: 1/2/2014 2:19:00 AM

Hello, thanks for sharing this well-penned and honest verse

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/21/2013 10:24:00 PM

Wow...pd nailed it! Cool poem! jimbo

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/5/2013 10:44:00 AM

That is the story of most relationships.. when one first meets, the attraction is far from near. A lovely way to fall upon the games of others... enjoyed~ LINDA

Elai Cee
Date: 5/9/2013 12:36:00 PM

yes that's right Linda!

John Posey

Date: 5/3/2013 7:59:00 PM

Great Haiku here.... Well done, my friend.... Welcome to PSoup.... Jake

Elai Cee
Date: 5/3/2013 9:25:00 PM

thanks John Posey!

Elai Cee

Date: 5/3/2013 11:07:00 AM

hey guys hope u'l enjoy to read this!