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Innocent Lie

First met, felt nothing

Tricks in his eyes were warning

He snatched my body

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James Peranteau

February 11, 2015 at 2:38 PM

Yikes ! A bit on the alarming don't ya think ! A great write dear poet for the young souls that for sure ! TY for sharing this profound write Elai. Have a blessed week........much love, james.......soup mail

Elai Cee

April 13, 2015 at 10:54 AM

yeah James Happy to see you here :) hihi

Honestly J.T.

January 2, 2014 at 2:19 AM

Hello, thanks for sharing this well-penned and honest verse

James Marshall Goff

November 21, 2013 at 10:24 PM

Wow...pd nailed it! Cool poem! jimbo

Poet Destroyer A

May 5, 2013 at 10:44 AM

That is the story of most relationships.. when one first meets, the attraction is far from near. A lovely way to fall upon the games of others... enjoyed~ LINDA

Elai Cee

May 9, 2013 at 12:36 PM

yes that's right Linda!