Sarah Hales Poet I do not know?

Innocences Is Thrown ... (Round 1) Sarah Hales V Sonnet Man ...

An urgent breath upon my neck 
A innocences tied to me 
Clothes pulled from me 
Silk and lace have no grace
As they lay upon the floor
You close the door 
You lock it behind you 
Your kiss is more a bite
I try to fight
But the darkness has your light
My curiosty takes me along
A cry as i find you deep inside
Your body covers mine
A groan from you as you hold my mind
A seduction of force that i do not ignore
My gasps of endless moments of you
My eyes closed as my innocences is thrown
Then you leave the room .....

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James Fraser June 20, 2010 at 5:49 AM Interesting challenge Sarah, this I must follow to the end >> James

Tirzah Conway June 19, 2010 at 1:37 PM I think you have him beat Sarah! Love the descriptions!~Tirzah~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 19, 2010 at 1:22 PM Well I read his Sonnet and its quite good.. I told him ..let the lady think about it ..haha.. now where is your reply to him..is this one it because as I said its EXCELLENT Sarah... with luv.. "Sweetheart"

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 19, 2010 at 12:37 PM Wow Sarah.. what a masterpiece poem.. so deep and vibrant in every line.. u describe the scene so intensely.. a new fav for the "Sweetheart"

Dakarai Cobb June 19, 2010 at 11:55 AM i will post my retort tomorrow. round two will be more intense on my part. i had to get a "feel" for you and believe me you did not disappoint. i am thoroughly impressed. i love a challenge as p.d. will tell you. you are more than a worth aponent. i just might lose my reputation as the worlds greatest flirt on this one. until tomorrow my dear. i am going to have to do some serious writing.

Dakarai Cobb June 19, 2010 at 11:50 AM this was a very good first blow. i am staggering now. but i will not go down without a fight

Poet Destroyer A June 19, 2010 at 11:41 AM So far so good for round #1, Sarah you are an impressive poet. Doc, is my friend . But you got this one my friend,..p..d..oh my this is good...Dakarai eat your own heart out,..p.d.