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Innocence All Too Fleeting

Sunlight shrouded in stormy clouds Innocence all too fleeting Callow trust hardens bitter but wise Sunlight shrouded in stormy clouds Fools blinded by love don't see the lies As we embrace life, naivete' dies Sunlight shrouded in stormy clouds Innocence all too fleeting Written 1/17/22 First Place Winner A BRIAN STRAND (1075) CONTEST 2/16/22

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Christuraj Alex
Date: 2/17/2022 5:33:00 AM
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Great theme and beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 2/17/2022 11:47:00 AM
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Thank you, Christuraj. ~I appreciate it. Robert
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 1/19/2022 10:41:00 AM
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"Fools blinded by love don't see the lies" sad how often this is true. You are right about innocence though. Good job.
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 1/20/2022 3:00:00 PM
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Thank you, Miranda, I appreciate your insight

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