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Innocence

Whom the horse is looking for Every day in the scarlet breeze It comes and taps at the door Have you forgotten your blue cheese Is it the one I dream of Accompanied by the charged shiver Especially when I am burnt out Like the lean exhausted river The last time I saw it In blue light it stood The pink link it signalled me I was in a restless wood I tried to recall Where had I seen it The tempest and the thunder squall Then the ocean of the mist But how come I am morose I have got nothing to do With this equine inquiry Then what for the blues overdose But the residual pink remains I have seen it somewhere Beside the blue Euphrates? My another mind inquired A Freudian explained me Your horse misses you Your bosom friend of the boyhood Longs for a hue or two He reached me a magazine Inside I came across the faces Of lovely blonde and black women In very skimpy dresses I couldn't remove my eyes Was in a reverie What is it, the analyst asked Is it the equine spree? Was the horse now inside me? Something I felt scary Does Mathew still hold good Was it the visual adultery? From above Dropped a dew Are you living still In the age of Mathew Was it the horse Yes, said he Goading you Into harmless glee And my thoughts Went astray Last night in Paul's house How charmingly in the sofa she lay The tremor in the cup of tea Now the horse again for the infidelity I knew it for sure It was the mental adultery Now Mathew not alone Beside him glared Mark I was in a blind cone This crimson sky how to shirk Tush tush Smiled the analyst Without the child You can't exist You are living in the light speed life It is the child that slows you down Makes you smile amidst your strife In the mirror you wear a crown February 12, 2018 Loss of an Innocent Mind - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann

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Date: 4/9/2018 3:35:00 PM
A most enjoyable and surprising read, Probir. Congrats on your podium win.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/9/2018 10:29:00 PM
Thank you, Line ... If a read is enjoyable and surprising simultaneously, it is indeed a pleasure ... Probir
Date: 2/28/2018 6:57:00 PM
Hello Probir I have enjoyed reading this poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 4/9/2018 10:30:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene ... Sorry for the belated reply ... sorry, it escaped notice ...
Date: 2/21/2018 11:14:00 PM
Awesome write, Probir congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/22/2018 4:33:00 AM
Thank you, Eve ...
Date: 2/21/2018 11:25:00 AM
Congratulations Probir on your excellent win with your intriguing and compelling poem of rediscovery and remembrance.. deeply beautiful! ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 2/21/2018 11:38:00 AM
Agreed.. and may I say that your poetry is amazing..
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/21/2018 11:29:00 AM
Thank you, Susan ... In our self- discovery is our joy ...
Date: 2/21/2018 10:59:00 AM
Congratulations Probir, very well done...
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Date: 2/21/2018 11:06:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie ...
Date: 2/21/2018 9:05:00 AM
Hello Probir. Congratulations on your win in my contest.It is a great poem, deep and funny alike. Meaningful. There are too many great lines to unpick it. And unpicking one should not do in any case, because your work stands on its own. That you for taking part in my contest. Kai
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Date: 2/21/2018 11:11:00 AM
First of all, thank you so much, Kai ... I am glad that you liked my poem ... Secondly,. unpicking one can do with any poet, major or minor, professional or amateur, especially when the poet attempts to convey a viewpoint that merits serious consideration ... Thank you once again for providing me with the means ...
Date: 2/21/2018 8:39:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this thought-provoking piece, Probir. Janice
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/21/2018 11:15:00 AM
Thank you for the meaningful comment which is a little uncommon here ...
Date: 2/21/2018 6:56:00 AM
Congrats Probir..a great win!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/21/2018 7:21:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 2/12/2018 6:47:00 AM
The last stanza brings it all together..well written poem, Probir..best for a win.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/13/2018 2:39:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay ...
Date: 2/12/2018 5:57:00 AM
An excellent write for this contest..
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/13/2018 2:40:00 AM
Thank you, Silent ...
Date: 2/12/2018 4:27:00 AM
Great theme .... Brilliantly done... Reads like a winner...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/13/2018 2:41:00 AM
Thank you ...

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