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Innocence

He called me that S word again deadly threats with His pen a coincidence in disguise I now seek out other guys Revirgin Mary I willn't be alive in fantasy with thee mercy falls with whips silent lay the chips Twist me turn me I won't say a word you killed your credibility when you called me "turd" I collaborate then dominate the way you like to play tomorrow turns happiness so long deity and gay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/4/2018 7:07:00 AM
And nerd who does not fit in like Trump. We are realizing just how the President is not supposed to be. Improve, improve and improve some more. That is my thinking. You never answer any of your responses.
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Date: 12/1/2017 10:48:00 AM
wow, this made POTD, congratulations :) I found it ... intriguing.
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Date: 8/9/2017 7:16:00 PM
Congratulations raw thinker for POTD honors and your creativity.
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Date: 7/28/2017 11:12:00 PM
Congrats on potd. An important message you bring here for the world to reflect upon in beautiful lines of a verse. Regs Sunita
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Date: 7/28/2017 7:50:00 PM
Congratulations on having your poem Innocence honored with POTD! Aloha, Connie : )
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Date: 7/28/2017 7:16:00 PM
congrats Raw Thinker.....Seren
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Date: 7/28/2017 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations raw thinker for POTD honors
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Date: 7/28/2017 12:13:00 PM
A streak of self defiance when confidence in oneself is assured - brilliant write - totally understand why you call yourself the raw thinker - cheers and congratulations on winning POTD - Indiana x x x
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Date: 7/28/2017 11:48:00 AM
I apologize my comment was meant to say a well written piece.
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Date: 7/28/2017 11:47:00 AM
Oh well written piece congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 7/28/2017 8:37:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. raw thinker - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/28/2017 7:46:00 AM
Congrats!!! on POTD my friend...^WW^
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Date: 7/28/2017 7:14:00 AM
Bitter sentiment fun to read, awesome balance! Congrats on potd honours :)
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Date: 7/28/2017 6:59:00 AM
Many congratulations on POTD Evie.
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Date: 7/28/2017 6:20:00 AM
Many congrats on your POTD Raw:-) hugs Jan xx
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