Raw Thinker Poet I do not know?

Innocence

He called me that S word again
deadly threats with His pen
a coincidence in disguise
I now seek out other guys

Revirgin Mary I willn't be
alive in fantasy with thee
mercy falls with whips
silent lay the chips

Twist me turn me
I won't say a word
you killed your credibility
when you called me "turd"

I collaborate then dominate
the way you like to play
tomorrow turns happiness
so long deity and gay

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James Horn March 4, 2018 at 7:07 AM And nerd who does not fit in like Trump. We are realizing just how the President is not supposed to be. Improve, improve and improve some more. That is my thinking. You never answer any of your responses.

Becca Teagan December 1, 2017 at 10:48 AM wow, this made POTD, congratulations :) I found it ... intriguing.

Robert Lindley August 9, 2017 at 7:16 PM Congratulations raw thinker for POTD honors and your creativity.

Sunita U.D Palawon July 28, 2017 at 11:12 PM Congrats on potd. An important message you bring here for the world to reflect upon in beautiful lines of a verse. Regs Sunita

Connie Marcum Wong July 28, 2017 at 7:50 PM Congratulations on having your poem Innocence honored with POTD! Aloha, Connie : )

Seren Roberts July 28, 2017 at 7:16 PM congrats Raw Thinker.....Seren

Charlie Smith July 28, 2017 at 12:23 PM Congratulations raw thinker for POTD honors

Indiana Shaw July 28, 2017 at 12:13 PM A streak of self defiance when confidence in oneself is assured - brilliant write - totally understand why you call yourself the raw thinker - cheers and congratulations on winning POTD - Indiana x x x

Edward Mccall July 28, 2017 at 11:48 AM I apologize my comment was meant to say a well written piece.

Edward Mccall July 28, 2017 at 11:47 AM Oh well written piece congratulations on POTD.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 28, 2017 at 8:37 AM - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. raw thinker - // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior July 28, 2017 at 7:46 AM Congrats!!! on POTD my friend...^WW^

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 28, 2017 at 7:14 AM Bitter sentiment fun to read, awesome balance! Congrats on potd honours :)

Tim Smith July 28, 2017 at 6:59 AM Many congratulations on POTD Evie.

Jan Allison July 28, 2017 at 6:20 AM Many congrats on your POTD Raw:-) hugs Jan xx