Inner Thoughts

Death                                                             Darkness
   Attacks all survivors                                            consumes, All victims
                                 
                                    Unwillingly,Careless
                            Frightful desires , killing everyone

          When death is upon us, we hide in our shells and release
  All sins we have committed .Darkness consumes all life. It makes you seem
                                          Hopeless...
                                   Dead, yet still breathing.
         After you wipe your fortuitous tears , Put on your mask of lies.
                     Laugh and smile like nothing is wrong.
                Take your life don't be shy. I'm your inner thoughts.
                                     Worthless..
                                      Pathetic..
                                        Ugly..
                 Death will kill you. Darkness will consume you.
          Pretty smiles and harmful desires won't save you in the end.
                                  Take the knife,
                              slice your feelings away.
                             Drown yourself in self pity. 
Death will kill you.                                               Darkness will swallow you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Bohto Avatar
January 4, 2017 at 12:31 AM
These feelings ...plague some of us.. artists at times. Writing about it ...helps us cope... and release ..these depressions.. of deadly revealings...They help us become ....great artists Shannon..and that's worthwhile living.
Fleming Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 5:22 PM
Powerful and all consuming...Certainly made an impact on me! My best wishes for your New Year, Shannon...May peace and contentedness bless you. Warmest regards! :) john
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