Constance La France Poet Fibonacci

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Poetry/Fibonacci/Inner Sanctum
Copyright Protected, ID 02-1620-750-03
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, February 03, 2024

For the International contest ,Pick-A-Title, Vol. 41, 
Sponsor, Edward  Ibeh, Judged 01/09/2024

Second Place

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Inner Sanctum

"The dream of a hidden door in the deepest and 
most intimate sanctum of the soul, which opens . . . "

                                           Carl Jung, Jungian Psychology

 
I
go
inner
to a place,
in the recesses
of my heart, my soul and spirit,
where a secret sanctum, a haven, refuge exists,
it is hidden, deep, deep and intimate, I wander the passages and corridors.

This place still silent a retreat refuge hideaway, just a space I can be quiet,
like a holy place, a temple, a sanctuary.
I have painted it beautiful,
I, artist of this
innermost
sanctum
of
mine.

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Edward Ibeh February 10, 2024 at 9:46 AM Congratulations on your podium win in my contest with this stunning double Fibonacci, Constance:-) One of the best ones I've read in a long time. It's tough to pull off the 21 syllables ender, but you did it twice! Amazing. Constance La France February 11, 2024 at 1:34 AM Edward, thank you for the contest and my placement, and for the congratulations and compliment, yes, those 21 syllables lines are not easy to fit on one line, lots of editing required to get it right. Hugs, Constance

Speaks Volumes February 5, 2024 at 12:16 AM To be at ultimate peace where you can call something entirely your own is such an enviable possession. You described your inner sanctum as a delightful oasis, and take us to a place that tantalizes the mind and it left me wishing for just such a place. What a lovely poem, so well told. Best wishes Wen Constance La France February 11, 2024 at 1:36 AM Wen, thank you for the compliment and lovely comment, hugs, Constance

Silent One February 3, 2024 at 10:36 AM Actually looks like a space ship! Two great fibs and done so well... best of luck in the contest.. Constance La France February 4, 2024 at 7:34 PM Silent, thank you for the compliment and encouragement, Constance

Susan Ashley February 3, 2024 at 8:57 AM Dear Constance, indeed, you paint murals on the walls of your inner sanctum. Your introspective place is peaceful, loving, beautiful and its beauty is reflected in your deep, soulful, poignant poetry. Your artistry is framed perfectly in the Fibonacci form. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Constance La France February 4, 2024 at 7:35 PM Susan, thank you for the compliment, and comment, hugs, Constance

Deb M February 3, 2024 at 8:47 AM Such beautifulness in your words Constance….a really touching write that is very relatable….Debx Constance La France February 4, 2024 at 7:36 PM Deb, thank you for the compliment, and comment, hugs, Constance

Ink Empress February 3, 2024 at 8:43 AM How beautiful and heartfelt is this dear constance, loved this; and felt this. And i think many too can resonate: your way with expressing thoughts and emotions in any form of poetry truly stands out for me. And this poem depicts the strength and inner light within you in the most profound manner: best wishes for the contest Constance La France February 4, 2024 at 7:37 PM Ink, thank you for the compliment, comment and encouragement, hugs, Constance

Stephan McBride February 3, 2024 at 6:59 AM You are full of Love, gentleness, humility, a Child of the Living God: ). Constance La France February 4, 2024 at 7:37 PM Stephan, thank you so much for the compliment, blessings, Constance