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Inner Peace

Unspoken word Nothing is heard Thoughts now deferred Float in my mind Safe from all harm Peaceful and calm Soothing with balm Time to unwind 7th December 2014 Theme 1 - Remember what peace there may be in silence
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 2/14/2019 6:40:00 PM
Lovely poem Jan!
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/14/2019 7:03:00 PM
thanks PM:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/9/2019 11:57:00 AM
Congrats on your win Jan..
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Date: 2/14/2019 7:02:00 PM
thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/8/2019 10:28:00 PM
Lovely, Jan. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/14/2019 7:02:00 PM
thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/8/2019 9:54:00 AM
Jan, congrats on your win in Brian's contest. This is such a peaceful and soothing poem. John
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/9/2019 12:17:00 PM
Thanks John I am very proud of this particular poem:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/8/2019 9:25:00 AM
Congratulations Jan! I so do resonate with that inner peace of unspoken words! xx
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Date: 1/9/2019 12:17:00 PM
Thanks Francesca:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/8/2018 9:55:00 AM
A belated Congrats to you. I had seen this one before!
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Date: 4/8/2018 9:59:00 AM
I'm made up I could use the create card feature and did it for the first time with this poem:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/5/2016 6:07:00 PM
Congrats on your win Jan
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/26/2016 5:36:00 PM
Thanks so much Joseph sorry I missed replying to your comment:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/5/2016 11:27:00 AM
Jan, Congratulations on your awesome placement. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog "from my pen" if you'd like. SMILES ~LINDA~
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Date: 10/5/2016 11:53:00 AM
Thanks so much Linda - I have this poem I wrote posted on many pages on the web especially church magazine and spiritual type sites:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/12/2015 12:36:00 AM
Hello Jan, This is wonderful. I'm going to add to my blog about self love. This will be great with blog about keeping calm when angry. Love this! You are truly gifted.
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Date: 11/12/2015 3:07:00 AM
Thanks so much for the lovely comment - I have found my poem on the web on many many pages and even in a church newsletter - I am so glad people find it calming:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/12/2015 1:32:00 PM
Hi Jon my 8 yr old is going to recite your poem in his school. Lots of love from Arvind n my son Devarshi
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Date: 8/12/2015 1:36:00 PM
Oh Arvind that is such a wonderful compliment to me that he liked it so much - thank you so much for letting me know - i work in a school and if I get the chance I love to share my poetry with some of the students:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/5/2015 11:03:00 AM
Jan, I felt inner peace as I read this beautiful poem, which you crafted under some stringent constraints. Remarkable!
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Date: 4/5/2015 11:48:00 AM
It meant a lot to me Paul - I was very disappointed it didn't place in the contest - but hey ho as long as it is read and enjoyed that is my prize:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/20/2015 3:01:00 AM
Hi Jan- you portray the feeling of inner peace so well. Enjoyed very much my friend!. Best Wishes Jan.
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Date: 3/20/2015 3:10:00 AM
Thanks William - I can do serious stuff too occasionally lol:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 2/25/2015 3:01:00 AM
A poem for you to cherish, Jan. Hugs, Alicia, xx
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Date: 2/25/2015 3:58:00 AM
Thanks Alicia:- hugs jan xx
Date: 2/21/2015 7:38:00 AM
I love those rare moments of calm Jan. This piece, just provides that peaceful feeling of contentment!. Great!xxx
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Date: 2/21/2015 7:46:00 AM
Thanks so much William:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/27/2014 7:32:00 AM
Very nice.
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/27/2014 9:10:00 AM
Thanks so much Ayesha:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 12/21/2014 4:57:00 AM
nice...
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Date: 12/21/2014 10:26:00 AM
Thanks so much Rene:-) Hugs Jan x
Date: 12/20/2014 8:11:00 AM
Jan, I love your compact 2 stanza, 4 syllables, 8 lines of peacefulness. Mater of fact, it's therapeutically served on sheets of white. Happy Holidays. ...irisrose...
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Date: 12/20/2014 8:31:00 AM
Thanks so much Iris i do appreciate your lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/18/2014 5:47:00 PM
I really like this, Jan. Very well Penned.
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Date: 12/18/2014 5:50:00 PM
It didn't get placed in the contest but I am really happy with the way it turned out:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 12/10/2014 4:58:00 PM
very beautifully penned jan excellent pen dear friend
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Date: 12/10/2014 5:04:00 PM
Thanks so much Liam:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 12/9/2014 4:03:00 PM
just stopping by to say hello, Jan. I am really going to miss our chats the end of this week!!
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Date: 12/9/2014 4:17:00 PM
Will still have my notebook with me and will be writing:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 12/9/2014 1:11:00 PM
Inner peace to find Outer peace through mankind,Inner projection to outer regeneration. I liked your inner peace poem.
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Date: 12/9/2014 3:33:00 PM
Many thanks Shelly:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/9/2014 1:05:00 AM
Wonderful write Jan... all the best Milly.
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Date: 12/9/2014 7:33:00 AM
Thanks so much Milly:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/9/2014 12:06:00 AM
with every line tranquility is there.. :)! and it goes well with the theme.. :)!
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Date: 12/9/2014 12:59:00 AM
Thanks so much Olive:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/9/2014 12:00:00 AM
Jan, congratulations on the poem of the day... Verlena
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Date: 12/9/2014 12:59:00 AM
Many thanks Verlena:-) Hugs Jan x
Date: 12/8/2014 10:24:00 PM
Congrats Jan,it is not by chance that this won,it is simply by content,wishing you luck in the contest...huggs
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/9/2014 12:58:00 AM
Thanks Kayod5 I am in need of inner peace at the moment;-( Hugs jan xx
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