Jan Allison Poet Verse

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Contest: Desiderata
Sponsor:- Nette Onclaud
Syllable Counter: How Many Syllables

Inner Peace

Unspoken word
Nothing is heard
Thoughts now deferred
Float in my mind

Safe from all harm
Peaceful and calm
Soothing with balm
Time to unwind


7th December 2014


Theme 1 - Remember what peace there may be in silence

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Paul Marc February 14, 2019 at 6:40 PM Lovely poem Jan! Jan Allison February 14, 2019 at 7:03 PM thanks PM:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May January 9, 2019 at 11:57 AM Congrats on your win Jan.. Jan Allison February 14, 2019 at 7:02 PM thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier January 8, 2019 at 10:28 PM Lovely, Jan. Congrats on your win. Jan Allison February 14, 2019 at 7:02 PM thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx

John Gondolf January 8, 2019 at 9:54 AM Jan, congrats on your win in Brian's contest. This is such a peaceful and soothing poem. John Jan Allison January 9, 2019 at 12:17 PM Thanks John I am very proud of this particular poem:-) hugs jan xx

Francesca Pappadogiannis January 8, 2019 at 9:25 AM Congratulations Jan! I so do resonate with that inner peace of unspoken words! xx Jan Allison January 9, 2019 at 12:17 PM Thanks Francesca:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich April 8, 2018 at 9:55 AM A belated Congrats to you. I had seen this one before! Jan Allison April 8, 2018 at 9:59 AM I'm made up I could use the create card feature and did it for the first time with this poem:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May October 5, 2016 at 6:07 PM Congrats on your win Jan Jan Allison November 26, 2016 at 5:36 PM Thanks so much Joseph sorry I missed replying to your comment:-( hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A October 5, 2016 at 11:27 AM Jan, Congratulations on your awesome placement. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog "from my pen" if you'd like. SMILES ~LINDA~ Jan Allison October 5, 2016 at 11:53 AM Thanks so much Linda - I have this poem I wrote posted on many pages on the web especially church magazine and spiritual type sites:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Dierdre W. November 12, 2015 at 12:36 AM Hello Jan, This is wonderful. I'm going to add to my blog about self love. This will be great with blog about keeping calm when angry. Love this! You are truly gifted. Jan Allison November 12, 2015 at 3:07 AM Thanks so much for the lovely comment - I have found my poem on the web on many many pages and even in a church newsletter - I am so glad people find it calming:-) hugs jan xx

Arvind Savalgi August 12, 2015 at 1:32 PM Hi Jon my 8 yr old is going to recite your poem in his school. Lots of love from Arvind n my son Devarshi Jan Allison August 12, 2015 at 1:36 PM Oh Arvind that is such a wonderful compliment to me that he liked it so much - thank you so much for letting me know - i work in a school and if I get the chance I love to share my poetry with some of the students:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Schneiter April 5, 2015 at 11:03 AM Jan, I felt inner peace as I read this beautiful poem, which you crafted under some stringent constraints. Remarkable! Jan Allison April 5, 2015 at 11:48 AM It meant a lot to me Paul - I was very disappointed it didn't place in the contest - but hey ho as long as it is read and enjoyed that is my prize:-) Hugs Jan xx

William Gray March 20, 2015 at 3:01 AM Hi Jan- you portray the feeling of inner peace so well. Enjoyed very much my friend!. Best Wishes Jan. Jan Allison March 20, 2015 at 3:10 AM Thanks William - I can do serious stuff too occasionally lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Julia Ward February 25, 2015 at 3:01 AM A poem for you to cherish, Jan. Hugs, Alicia, xx Jan Allison February 25, 2015 at 3:58 AM Thanks Alicia:- hugs jan xx

William Gray February 21, 2015 at 7:38 AM I love those rare moments of calm Jan. This piece, just provides that peaceful feeling of contentment!. Great!xxx Jan Allison February 21, 2015 at 7:46 AM Thanks so much William:-) Hugs Jan xx

Ayesha Karim December 27, 2014 at 7:32 AM Very nice. Jan Allison December 27, 2014 at 9:10 AM Thanks so much Ayesha:-) Hugs jan xxx

Rene Chabriere December 21, 2014 at 4:57 AM nice... Jan Allison December 21, 2014 at 10:26 AM Thanks so much Rene:-) Hugs Jan x

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis December 20, 2014 at 8:11 AM Jan, I love your compact 2 stanza, 4 syllables, 8 lines of peacefulness. Mater of fact, it's therapeutically served on sheets of white. Happy Holidays. ...irisrose... Jan Allison December 20, 2014 at 8:31 AM Thanks so much Iris i do appreciate your lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xx

Cona Adams December 18, 2014 at 5:47 PM I really like this, Jan. Very well Penned. Jan Allison December 18, 2014 at 5:50 PM It didn't get placed in the contest but I am really happy with the way it turned out:-) Hugs jan xxx

Liam Mcdaid December 10, 2014 at 4:58 PM very beautifully penned jan excellent pen dear friend Jan Allison December 10, 2014 at 5:04 PM Thanks so much Liam:-) Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich December 9, 2014 at 4:03 PM just stopping by to say hello, Jan. I am really going to miss our chats the end of this week!! Jan Allison December 9, 2014 at 4:17 PM Will still have my notebook with me and will be writing:-) hugs jan xx

Shelly Wiseberg December 9, 2014 at 1:11 PM Inner peace to find Outer peace through mankind,Inner projection to outer regeneration. I liked your inner peace poem. Jan Allison December 9, 2014 at 3:33 PM Many thanks Shelly:-) Hugs Jan xx

Millicent Mashatola December 9, 2014 at 1:05 AM Wonderful write Jan... all the best Milly. Jan Allison December 9, 2014 at 7:33 AM Thanks so much Milly:-) hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 9, 2014 at 12:06 AM with every line tranquility is there.. :)! and it goes well with the theme.. :)! Jan Allison December 9, 2014 at 12:59 AM Thanks so much Olive:-) hugs Jan xx

Verlena S. Walker December 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM Jan, congratulations on the poem of the day... Verlena Jan Allison December 9, 2014 at 12:59 AM Many thanks Verlena:-) Hugs Jan x

Kayod5 Kayode December 8, 2014 at 10:24 PM Congrats Jan,it is not by chance that this won,it is simply by content,wishing you luck in the contest...huggs Jan Allison December 9, 2014 at 12:58 AM Thanks Kayod5 I am in need of inner peace at the moment;-( Hugs jan xx

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