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Inner Pain

Haunted by silence, Within everything that surrounds me, My own personal ghosts, What could have been, What to change, Unhappiness I wish to rearrange, Everything feels so strange, From the first glimpse of a name, My entire outlook changed, Can i be revived? Can i be saved? Therein lies the blame, Of something haunting, Truly daunting, Something cold that wraps it's claws around my neck, I'm breathing now, But that I could change, Inside the darkness.. I feel the pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/13/2015 5:46:00 PM
I hope you can be saved and relieved of the pain. Lovely Tim
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Charli Pitts
Date: 10/15/2015 3:52:00 AM
Thank you Tim. Someday, I hope my pain will end. I have PTSD. All of my words stem from the angst involved with it.
Date: 10/13/2015 1:50:00 PM
Hi Charli, wow, I can't help but feel I know this darkness a little to well. It's hard to move away from. However, hope is at the end. Love this verse. SKAT
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Charli Pitts
Date: 10/15/2015 3:51:00 AM
I think we have a lot in common Skat. I'm still new to this, but if you'd like you could email me at charlipitts1234@gmail.com

Book: Shattered Sighs