Charli Pitts Poet Free verse

Inner Pain

Haunted by silence,
Within everything that surrounds me,
My own personal ghosts,
What could have been,
What to change,
Unhappiness I wish to rearrange,
Everything feels so strange,
From the first glimpse of a name,
My entire outlook changed,
Can i be revived?
Can i be saved? 
Therein lies the blame,
Of something haunting, 
Truly daunting, 
Something cold that wraps it's claws around my neck, 
I'm breathing now, 
But that I could change, 
Inside the darkness.. I feel the pain.

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Tim Smith October 13, 2015 at 5:46 PM I hope you can be saved and relieved of the pain. Lovely Tim Charli Pitts October 15, 2015 at 3:52 AM Thank you Tim. Someday, I hope my pain will end. I have PTSD. All of my words stem from the angst involved with it.

Skat A October 13, 2015 at 1:50 PM Hi Charli, wow, I can't help but feel I know this darkness a little to well. It's hard to move away from. However, hope is at the end. Love this verse. SKAT Charli Pitts October 15, 2015 at 3:51 AM I think we have a lot in common Skat. I'm still new to this, but if you'd like you could email me at [email protected]