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Inner Joy

Varicolored smoke bombs, at a three generation celebration,
Splendors, rest and excitement, on a sun drenched vacation,
A heart bursting with song, love following wherever you go;
And the return to raptures, beneath a multicolored rainbow!
Fragrant flowers opening wide, their petals to gold summer,
And a moonlit tango enchantment, on ebony edges of slumber.


Written on 6/5/2021
For: ALL YOURS (Jun 7) Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 6/8/2021 10:37:00 AM
"Ebony edges of slumber," "moonlit tango enchantment," "varicolored smoke bombs" - a rainbow of multicolored images "bursts" out of your "inner joy" Evelyn letting us sample happiness! This is delightful and so creative. Congratulations on your win!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/8/2021 11:46:00 AM
Thank you for the joy of your appreciation and for your kind congratulations, Sam. Have a blessed day, my friend, Evelyn
Date: 6/7/2021 4:29:00 PM
Hi Evelyn, I'm just coming back to congrats on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/7/2021 5:53:00 PM
I extend to you my deepest thanks, Alexis. Do have a wonderful evening, Evelyn
Date: 6/7/2021 7:14:00 AM
Lovely Evelyn. This is such a warm and beautiful feeling. Good stuff. God Bless, JB
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/7/2021 11:27:00 AM
I am glad you found it to be so. Thank you. All good wishes, Evelyn
Date: 6/6/2021 3:09:00 PM
What a superb write that brings inner happiness exposed within the very intriguing life scenes, this is going to my fav, have a wonderful evening dear friend Evelyn and best wishes for a win.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/6/2021 4:24:00 PM
I am so honored by your kind words and the fav, Lasaad. Thank you so much, and do have a blessed evening, :D Evelyn
Date: 6/6/2021 2:58:00 PM
WoW! Evelyn, I echo what Victor said; this is beautiful. Thanks for gifting us with your art. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/6/2021 4:43:00 PM
You are most welcome, dear Alexis. Your nice remarks are wonderful to hear. Thank you and do have a lovely evening, :D Evelyn
Date: 6/6/2021 12:43:00 PM
Happy Sunday in sunshine my poet friend Evelyn. Love when you reach out to us bringing such a fine gift in 'Inner Joy'. Your poems always leave me nowhere else to go. Though no place I'd rather be. -Richard
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Quoth Theraven
Date: 6/9/2021 7:39:00 AM
Still so nice to visit here. -R
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/6/2021 4:51:00 PM
Thank you for such happy thoughts this sunny Sunday, dear friend. I am thrilled that you took away so much from this. Be blessed, Evelyn :D
Date: 6/5/2021 10:54:00 PM
You always paint the most beautiful scenes in life.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/6/2021 11:16:00 AM
I like spreading good cheer. Thank you. :)
Date: 6/5/2021 8:27:00 PM
Who wouldn’t enjoy hanging out with a mind so full of joy!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/5/2021 8:33:00 PM
For me, happiness isn't a destination, but a way of traveling. Thank you so much. :D
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