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Inner Joy

Varicolored smoke bombs, at a three generation celebration,
Splendors, rest and excitement, on a sun drenched vacation,
A heart bursting with song, love following wherever you go;
And the return to raptures, beneath a multicolored rainbow!
Fragrant flowers opening wide, their petals to gold summer,
And a moonlit tango enchantment, on ebony edges of slumber.


Written on 6/5/2021
For: ALL YOURS (Jun 7) Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kauffman Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 10:37 AM
"Ebony edges of slumber," "moonlit tango enchantment," "varicolored smoke bombs" - a rainbow of multicolored images "bursts" out of your "inner joy" Evelyn letting us sample happiness! This is delightful and so creative. Congratulations on your win!
Buehler Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 11:46 AM
Thank you for the joy of your appreciation and for your kind congratulations, Sam. Have a blessed day, my friend, Evelyn
Y. Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 4:29 PM
Hi Evelyn, I'm just coming back to congrats on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Buehler Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 5:53 PM
I extend to you my deepest thanks, Alexis. Do have a wonderful evening, Evelyn
Ball Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 7:14 AM
Lovely Evelyn. This is such a warm and beautiful feeling. Good stuff. God Bless, JB
Buehler Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 11:27 AM
I am glad you found it to be so. Thank you. All good wishes, Evelyn
Poet Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 3:09 PM
What a superb write that brings inner happiness exposed within the very intriguing life scenes, this is going to my fav, have a wonderful evening dear friend Evelyn and best wishes for a win.
Buehler Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 4:24 PM
I am so honored by your kind words and the fav, Lasaad. Thank you so much, and do have a blessed evening, :D Evelyn
Y. Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 2:58 PM
WoW! Evelyn, I echo what Victor said; this is beautiful. Thanks for gifting us with your art. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Buehler Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 4:43 PM
You are most welcome, dear Alexis. Your nice remarks are wonderful to hear. Thank you and do have a lovely evening, :D Evelyn
Theraven Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 12:43 PM
Happy Sunday in sunshine my poet friend Evelyn. Love when you reach out to us bringing such a fine gift in 'Inner Joy'. Your poems always leave me nowhere else to go. Though no place I'd rather be. -Richard
Theraven Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 7:39 AM
Still so nice to visit here. -R
Buehler Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 4:51 PM
Thank you for such happy thoughts this sunny Sunday, dear friend. I am thrilled that you took away so much from this. Be blessed, Evelyn :D
Buhagiar Avatar
June 5, 2021 at 10:54 PM
You always paint the most beautiful scenes in life.
Buehler Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 11:16 AM
I like spreading good cheer. Thank you. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2021 at 8:27 PM
Who wouldn’t enjoy hanging out with a mind so full of joy!
Buehler Avatar
June 5, 2021 at 8:33 PM
For me, happiness isn't a destination, but a way of traveling. Thank you so much. :D
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