Inner Feelings

inner feelings race round my brain
not always happy, some causing hurt,
tender moments lost in the past 
resurrected each passing hour.
oh how I long for inner peace,
so I stop and try to recount the moments...when 
passion turned to despair.
easily drowned in hopes anew
can I can't I, which side will the coin fall.
this not knowing not even caring
in which I lose myself 
only for these thoughts to raise their head
nightly when at my rest.


June 22 2016

Judged 27 June 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 10:11 AM
yes, they always seem to haunt us when we are at night trying to sleep. Good one, Seren. Hope you are doing well.
Roberts Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 11:52 AM
Thank you Andrea, yes your mind sometimes won't click off,thsts the end of sleep
Cheema Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 2:26 PM
Can I can't I....coin fall! A truly introspective write, Seren! Good Luck!
Roberts Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 4:47 AM
Thank you so much for stopping by....Seren
Smith Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 9:16 PM
Some deep feelings Seren, good luck in the contest.
Roberts Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 5:01 AM
Hi Tim, thanks for taking time to read my work...Seren
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