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Inner Essence

My fangs Can explain The nature of my being Better then any name Unsharpened So as of to heighten The pleasure in their meaning Merciless Relentless There is no point in screaming Your mind I’ll break Your soul I’ll take The body left for carrion Except the eyes I’ll save for my collection for my love p.d. who has teh only eyes worth keeping. and the only body worth ravishing. and the only soul worth feeling.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/26/2015 5:42:00 PM
of who?
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Date: 9/23/2010 10:20:00 AM
lol,,, i want my name on this one,,i want them fangs. Make me scream thru the pillow. lol.. But, my eyes you must save them in your pocket...xoxooxoxoox,..p.d.
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Date: 8/27/2010 4:01:00 PM
The title is a real eye-catcher. Enjoyed this read and love the last 5 lines. Cheers, Alana
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Date: 8/19/2010 6:37:00 PM
oi! I love it regardless That you are to eeeeeeeeeekkkkkkk! wow! it all falls in to place. And your first comment made me laugh so hard. I think i will just hand you my eyes, no need to bother with the rest.. The fangs I know exactly how to keep them under control,,mm mm mm laters my Sweet Nate,..love ,,p.d.
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Date: 8/19/2010 6:28:00 PM
yikes and yuck!
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Date: 8/19/2010 6:14:00 PM
BRAVO..now u are talking my BBF... get them poems posted back on luv.. miss them. and u.. ciao
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Date: 8/19/2010 12:26:00 PM
I LUV this piece Nate.. so happy u are BACK my BBF and no more going away again.. luv the intro of my fants ..sets the tone right away to sit up and pay attention.. the rest is gravy sweets... enjoyed.. with luv..your BBF .. from Italy..ciao..
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Date: 8/19/2010 3:09:00 AM
Dark and intriguing write, well written. Enjoyed the read.
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