Inner Dialogues

She could not recall when her inner voice
began to narrate her life.

It noted every humdrum happenstance, 
each ordinary advent,
as if there were indeed a story unfolding
toward a bold and literary purpose.

Until now the Teller had related her biography,
in a subdued commentary.
Now it openly opined
upon every uninteresting moment.
 
One day she caught the voice speaking
as a thing apart from her.
She blushed as if she had been discovered 
speaking naked behind an invisible microphone.

The voice went on to say that her life
was a going to be an American Masterpiece.

She replied, smiling somewhat smugly,

"carry on."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 12:02 PM
Enjoyed! I really love your writing style Eric. My attention is difficult to keep, you manage more than most. ;),
Ashford Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 12:40 PM
Thank you Maureen, sometimes I lose my own attention, while writing a poem, and oddly enough, sometimes they work better :-)
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