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Inner Child

Far, far away you've gone as worlds divided us
in a time I cannot engrave or  mold…just shadows,
just girlish shadows of you that I barely felt
the moonlit breeze kneading that auburn hair.

Weeping, my glances peer through those eyes
I once knew so well. Now, they are blurry,
vanishing from  twilights we both shared:  how I 
yearn for you, dear inner child, with love golden and mild…
somehow, this heart  knows you're just walking  breathing,

maybe hiding    nestling right beside me. Oh, can we talk?



For Silent One's Iconic Songs
Inspired by the music of Guns N' Roses
' Sweet Child O' Mine'    8/5/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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September 4, 2017 at 8:36 AM
Very deep Nette and I liked your take on the contest.. congratulations on your placement..
Kiser Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 10:56 PM
I love this, think it's a winner, so good luck in the contest. I wrestled with my inner child for years, in dreams and nightmares; now we are one again. Good luck.
Paras Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 12:04 PM
Your interpretation of this song is laudable that it moves me to connect with the child within, "Oh, can we talk?" This poem has seized the moment. Thank you for your compliment on my work!
Sivey Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 4:19 AM
Wow, another tremendous write my friend! You sure do know how to impress me completely Nette! Just when I thought I've seen every aspect of your poetry you come up with another one to bring me awe and baffling me with delight! Thank you for sharing this illustrious piece this morning! Great Work!!
Warrior Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 1:29 AM
Very nicely penned my friend...best of luck...although you probably already won lol...^WW^
Roper Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 9:36 PM
this is wonderful, Nette, luck in the contest~*
Sands Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 3:49 PM
Oh this one is great Nette! So perfect for the contest :)
Pandit Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 3:27 PM
Inspiring!
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August 4, 2017 at 3:11 PM
- Never forget your inner child, Nette - Beautifully written - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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