Inner Child

Deep night- 
In its quiver,
I write.

Perused-
Subconscious yields, 
True muse

Child’s Zen
Speaking softly…
From when.


David Mohn
WHISPERS OF A MUSE - Poetry Contest
24 Nov 2014

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Kelly Deschler

December 5, 2014 at 9:09 PM

I often write from my inner child's point of view. It's a nice way to escape and remember when... Your poem was very heartfelt and soulful, and I enjoyed it very much. Nicely done, David!

Andrea Dietrich

December 4, 2014 at 7:30 PM

yours is a very interesting one and I love how it was actually about a muse and one's writing. I tried doing mine that way too. Congrats on the win.

Maurice Yvonne

December 3, 2014 at 6:05 PM

A wonderful write, taste in poetry is subjective, for me this is a fav. Congratulations on your win.

Nette Onclaud

December 3, 2014 at 10:32 AM

i was taken by the meditative tone of your mellow art, david... this makes me breathe.. thanks for being part of my contest with shining congrats!

Nette Onclaud

December 3, 2014 at 10:32 AM

i was taken by the meditative tone of your mellow art, david... this makes me breathe.. thanks for being part of my contest with shining congrats!

Brenda Meier-Hans

December 3, 2014 at 9:49 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations David.

Jan Allison

December 3, 2014 at 9:34 AM

Dropping back with my congrats David:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

November 26, 2014 at 1:31 PM

Hi David, I'm impressed with this entry. I am still trying to find something different; wrote a couple but I'm not satisfied with them. // paul

Paul Callus

December 3, 2014 at 10:49 AM

Back with congrats, David...very merited. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

November 26, 2014 at 12:01 AM

wow, you did so well here with this one. MIne sucks next to this one. but I don't know how to do this kind very well. Maybe will post it tomorrow!! I think Nette will love this.