Inner Child

Deep night- 
In its quiver,
I write.

Perused-
Subconscious yields, 
True muse

Child’s Zen
Speaking softly…
From when.


David Mohn
WHISPERS OF A MUSE - Poetry Contest
24 Nov 2014

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 12/5/2014 9:09:00 PM

I often write from my inner child's point of view. It's a nice way to escape and remember when... Your poem was very heartfelt and soulful, and I enjoyed it very much. Nicely done, David!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2014 7:30:00 PM

yours is a very interesting one and I love how it was actually about a muse and one's writing. I tried doing mine that way too. Congrats on the win.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/3/2014 6:05:00 PM

A wonderful write, taste in poetry is subjective, for me this is a fav. Congratulations on your win.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/3/2014 10:32:00 AM

i was taken by the meditative tone of your mellow art, david... this makes me breathe.. thanks for being part of my contest with shining congrats!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/3/2014 10:32:00 AM

i was taken by the meditative tone of your mellow art, david... this makes me breathe.. thanks for being part of my contest with shining congrats!

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/3/2014 9:49:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations David.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/3/2014 9:34:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats David:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 11/26/2014 1:31:00 PM

Hi David, I'm impressed with this entry. I am still trying to find something different; wrote a couple but I'm not satisfied with them. // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 12/3/2014 10:49:00 AM

Back with congrats, David...very merited. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/26/2014 12:01:00 AM

wow, you did so well here with this one. MIne sucks next to this one. but I don't know how to do this kind very well. Maybe will post it tomorrow!! I think Nette will love this.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/25/2014 7:35:00 AM

You did an amazing job on such a hard challenge. Good luck in the contest David.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/25/2014 1:19:00 AM

beautifully penned David - its a very challenging form - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx