In-Laws

as the case my be,
many in-laws or out-laws,
relatives of flaws…
~
 at the least, no peace,
cause of marriage mating-pause,
 epic dysfunctions…
~
erections of rules,
needed fool, not Viagra…
marriage is stagnate!

By John Moses Freeman
For and in Honor of Dr Ram
And Contest

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Robert A. Dufresne

June 25, 2011 at 7:44 AM

Missed this one of yourws John... laced with scary truth! : ) congrats on your win my friend

Margaret Okubo

June 15, 2011 at 6:15 AM

Excellent senyru John. Love it. Blessings.

Carolyn Devonshire

June 10, 2011 at 1:22 PM

Ah, I must have mised this when I was away fishing, John. Very clever and packed with wisdom as well. Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 8, 2011 at 10:13 AM

Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest Moses. Love, Carol

Jack Horne

June 7, 2011 at 11:59 AM

LOL Many congrats, John : )

Cory Long

June 7, 2011 at 8:45 AM

congrats on your win.. cory

Anne Rutherford

June 7, 2011 at 5:54 AM

Congratulations on your win John , great senryu. Anne

Tahera Mannan

June 7, 2011 at 5:28 AM

Yes very true my friend. Many congrats for this win Moses.

Joseph Osita

June 7, 2011 at 1:03 AM

An excellent write.Many congrats on your 3rd place win.

Andrea Dietrich

June 6, 2011 at 8:49 PM

I sure liked the pun of out laws! Grreat win, John. Congratulations.

Debbie Guzzi

June 6, 2011 at 8:31 PM

very nice double entandre! Thanks for all your nice comments lately. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 6, 2011 at 3:42 PM

congrats Moses my friend on a super third place win in Dr. Ram's contest with this wonderful write luv.. enjoy another grand victory .. hope all is well with u and are enjoying lovely days of sunshine..

Gwendolen Song

June 6, 2011 at 3:15 PM

Ohhhhhhhh. My!!!!! Congrats on this fun write doing so well, JOhn. I have really enjoyed reading them all! I don't envy Dr. Ram havin to judge them. Such a difficult endeavor. Unique and great words selected for this in law write! Hey, hope u are doing great. Gwendolen

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 6, 2011 at 3:10 PM

Congratulations on the third place win in my contest, John

James Fraser

June 5, 2011 at 1:24 PM

Fine Senryu series John. Aye, the good in-laws. All the best in Dr. Ram's contest :)

Robert A. Dufresne

May 31, 2011 at 7:25 PM

very funny write John... ( and many times true) especially liked your tactful second verse! Good one

Gwendolen Song

May 30, 2011 at 2:09 PM

Hi John- Thanks for comments on my Out Law in Law poem--appreciate your remarks. I like the relative of flaws line. Epic dysfunctions coins the emotions just perfectly. I am blessed to have super kind in laws-only 2 of them are living and they mean the world to me. It's just easier to enjoy this play on words for Dr. Ram's contest. Happy Memorial Day to you, Gwendolen