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INKWELL THEOLOGY

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The nib scrapes the page like hiking boots on river rock. Not for fame—that ghost dissolves in tea-stained mornings. Nor for catharsis' loot, though confessional steam sometimes evolves into verse. No. It's the hunger: that sly ache when streetlight bleeds on wet asphalt, and you taste copper on your tongue, awake to the hum in telephone wires—a vault of unsaid things. You become conduit, antenna trembling for static's raw hymn~ translating the fracture: how grief sounds when it hits marble; how laughter thins at the rim of an empty glass. Each poem is a compass needle swinging wildly—not toward truth, but the why beneath broken sidewalks—the sacred needle piercing silence allowing the dark sky to cry.
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Lawless Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 5:01 PM
hey, i remember ink wells and the scratch of the pen and the blots that marred the page....then came the ball point pen and I had to make my own scritchy noises. Some great .. stop the presses" lines here Sara. If it doesn't make POTD I shall start an investigation. A definite FAVE for and from me.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 5:11 PM
awww, thank you, John! liked 'stop the presses' comments. Thanks for the fave and your continuing, enthusiastic support
Hind Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 1:29 PM
"You become conduit, antenna trembling for static's raw hymn~ translating the fracture: how grief sounds when it hits marble; how laughter thins at the rim of an empty glass." woah, amazing lines there, Sara <3
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 4:32 PM
thank you so much for your enthuasiasm for those words. appreciate you, hugs, Sara
Gauthier Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 8:16 AM
Love your finale ~ the final stanza is outstanding ~
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 4:32 PM
wow, thank you! your words mean a great deal to me.
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