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Inking Invisible Letters

beneath the veils of darkened nights i write to you in invisible ink love letters from my heart concealed thoughts trace every edge of your existence i arch my letters like the curves of backs in shadows on the wall erasing the distance between us by connecting the stars we shine in the brilliance of the moon become the whispers carried in the wind the breathless sighs before the hush of dreams by morning's rise we fade out with the letters of my heart unseen

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Date: 11/1/2019 7:00:00 AM
Silent desires flow within this invisible ink your beautiful poem so wonderfully expresses. Many thoughts are kept inside, dreams, longings that only we know. A soft, sensual and passionate poem my friend.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/1/2019 9:54:00 AM
the secrets of broken hearts are always locked inside...the walls keep them safe... thank you my friend :) I appreciate you and all your kindness.... hugs
Date: 11/1/2019 5:23:00 AM
Brilliant thoughts of love. Blinking my eyes; tears to rain piercing my heart again and again. Hopes though dim my soul yearns to love floating on fairy fins. Getting awake after acute ached core of liking are flying Wearing a robe irk and igniting fantasy to win. Wishing you all the best. with regards. sk.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/1/2019 9:53:00 AM
love your poetic comment....thank you so much Sanjay :)
Date: 11/1/2019 5:03:00 AM
Another beautiful poem you've penned. I love it... You always make the reader feel. Bless you, dear lady - Love, Gina
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/1/2019 5:07:00 AM
Thank you so much Gina. I have many emotions... John Hamilton penned a dedication to me that was very touching and an insight :). Love and hugs
Date: 10/31/2019 11:01:00 PM
Romantic and mysterious, I love the invisible ink idea. It says so much that can't be seen.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/1/2019 5:05:00 AM
Sometimes it’s better that way... thank you so much ... hugs
Date: 10/31/2019 9:35:00 PM
Bravo, Sandra. A FAVE for me.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/1/2019 5:04:00 AM
Thank you so much Line I am honored that you enjoyed this one that much :) hugs
Date: 10/31/2019 9:32:00 PM
Gorgeous, Sandy...could feel this one like invisible ink on my own <3
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/1/2019 5:03:00 AM
Invisible ink from the heart. Unseen...:). Hugs ... thank you
Date: 10/31/2019 8:18:00 PM
Oh Man, you got this love thing down my friend this one is really, really good Sandra
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/31/2019 8:23:00 PM
Thanks Bobby, it was going to be for your contest until i saw you had the limit at 16 lines...but it turned out good so i kept it...i should thank you for the contest that gave me the idea :) hugs
Date: 10/31/2019 8:17:00 PM
Sweet, sad, lonely... lovely, extremely well written... Ann
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/31/2019 8:23:00 PM
Thank you so much Ann :) hugs

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