Ink

my soul bleeds black ink

   feelings spill onto paper

          ~~ ink flows with my tears

on writing and wordssenryu

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Gert W. Knop

April 11, 2011 at 3:59 AM

Wow, what a great Senryu, Francine! ...ink flows with my tears!!! Enjoyed the read this early Monday afternoon...Gert:)

Carolyn Devonshire

April 5, 2011 at 8:30 PM

Soup mail, Francine

Andrea Dietrich

April 4, 2011 at 9:39 PM

You did magnificently with this little senryu!

Sara Kendrick

April 4, 2011 at 5:43 AM

Very creative and descriptive work...Enjoyed reading today...Thanks for the review..Sara

Harry Horsman

April 3, 2011 at 11:36 PM

In the hand or in the eye, your feelings Francine, are recorded wonderfully here on soup. awesome. Harry

Carolyn Devonshire

April 3, 2011 at 12:29 PM

Like the way the ink represents the emotions in your soul, Francine. Only someone with deep feelings could express themselves this way. Excellent poem! Love, Carolyn

Michael Jordan

April 3, 2011 at 4:59 AM

Francine, this says it all and then some. Out standing senryu, a fav, mj

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 2, 2011 at 7:56 PM

Emotionally charged piece Francine .. the tear speaks it's personality in your lovely lines..good luck in the contest by HG.. and thankxx for enjoying my Counterpart entry .. this is a super fun contest luv..