Injection

O sorrow doth linger and last,
injection of formaldehyde —
preservation of solitude 
on shroud swept cliffs — they call my name!

2/19/2020
Poe-etic Verse Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Charles Messina
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Messina Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 5:58 AM
I absolutely love this, Kim. What a great entry :) Congratulations on your win in my contest. Thanks for entering.. Hugs Charlie
Rodrigues Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 2:19 PM
Thank you, Charles! :)
Watt Avatar
March 3, 2020 at 12:09 AM
"injection of formaldehyde" - creepy! Just like Poe, right? Congrats Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 2:19 PM
Thank you, John!
Somadas Avatar
March 2, 2020 at 9:09 PM
Wonderful verse Kim..Congrats on your great win..
Rodrigues Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 2:20 PM
Thank you, Jenish!
Krutsinger Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 10:45 PM
The "formaldehyde" truly took me in a different direction than I expected. Which was good.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 2:20 PM
Thank you, Caren!
Faulkner Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 4:16 PM
So gothic and bone chilling, well done, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 6:49 PM
Thank you, Michelle! :)
Wolf Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 7:58 PM
Poe-tent penning, my friend. Great contest entry! ~ Evermore
Rodrigues Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 8:58 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Roper Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 4:02 PM
Nicely done, Kim, great for a top win.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 8:58 PM
Hope! Thanks!
Green Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 3:23 PM
So very cool Kim. Creepy and creative, something Poe himself would be proud of. Best wishes in the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 8:59 PM
Thank you for saying so!
Andresen Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 1:54 PM
- Really great poe-etic written, Kim - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 3:15 PM
Thanks so much! :)
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