Initiation

The evening air spreading its soft chill,
Playing with the blue mountain to nature's will,
New snow flakes engulfs the barren hills,
Taming my heart with tender warmth and thrills. 

At the inn the keeper holds a lighted candle, 
For us to follow with our packaged bundle,
With grace I wish to avoid a scandal,
Watch my man close the lone door by its handle.

Firewood burns in the wooded homestead,
Spreads it warmth over the snug cushioned bed,
Waits to partake in our action unsaid,
Melting moments for me to love or dread.

Delightful face turns to look up to me,
Candid sensuality in phantoms plea,
Urges me to be forthwith naked and free, 
Passion denudes barriers under siege.

Anticipation now burns to aspire,
Taut space between our naked bodies perspire,
And I blush in its heat with hot desire,
Keep my eyes closed as he sets me afire.

Intoxicants flame touched by libations 
Sequesters inflamed wet-lip deviations,
Within pleasure kiss gratification,
Outraging tongue's in communication.

Open my eyes to his tactile fondness, 
Soon hands engage the spherical hardness,
Force me to opt with resoluteness, 
And lie on my back touched by tenderness.

My desperate palms crawl over his back,
Nuptial quivers awake rapture's with knack,
Crazy teeth dig and wildly bite his neck,
Betwixt the legs he performs his attack.  

In anticipation I surrender,
As he sets to probes the naked blunder,
Rave’s down the silky valley to plunder,
Unzipped by the latent strike, I thunder.

Reeling from the quick fervent thrusts I cry,
With rage responding to his sadist try, 
As he pulls back to enter and defy,  
Totally exposed I shudder and sigh.

Quaking with delirious pleasure I cuddle,
Both legs entrapped within the carnal struggle,
Brace quivering bottom in the muddles,
As petals rock within the moist puddles.

Smiling at my denuded enslavement,
Holding my arms in ardent deployment,
Torments my frail defiance with enjoyment,
While his knee's direct steady placement.
 

Seething with resistance his hardness grows,
Raw power sustaining his taming blows,
Ecstasy mows the bulging heat to sow,
Freely we climax in its cosmic flow.

Begs reprieve for his ebbed shrunken demands;
While in love he obeys all my commands.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/20/2010 8:58:00 PM
hmm...thats a very nice piece
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