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Initiate

You were right
All along
What you said
That night
The message was strong
I'm on my own
Trust no one
Let no one in
Hide what you've done
Do whatever it takes
Sit home alone
Don't let your
Defenses down
Don't put down that wall
Look how far
You've come now
But that only means
Further to fall
When you reach that ledge
Don't hesitate
Take a deep breath
And communicate
Take a step forward
And initiate
Now jump

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 1/3/2009 9:30:00 AM
Provocative write here, Tyffani ... although I would never tell anyone this kind of advice you've done a good job of tying it to wanting to leave the planet ... with friends like that who would want to stay ... LOL ... wonderful writing and a well-deserved selection to be a feature here at the Soup! Hope '09 is a great year for you!!
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Date: 12/31/2008 8:34:00 PM
Tyffani,Congratulations YOUR Featured Poem "Initiate" follows the theme of many of YOUR POEMS "Morbid" but very well Written...HG
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Date: 12/29/2008 10:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Warmest wishes for a safe and happy new year! Love, Shar
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Date: 12/29/2008 9:13:00 AM
Tyffani - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – I hope the coming year has many blessings in store for you and those you love – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/28/2008 6:35:00 PM
Congratulations on this poem being featured this week. Lots to ponder here in your words!! Carrie
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Date: 12/28/2008 4:59:00 PM
Congratulations Tiffani on "Initiate" being featured. Jump into life not away from it. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 12/28/2008 4:44:00 PM
Much to ponder here. The short lines work well to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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