Iniquity

INIQUITY The absence of moral or spiritual values afflict we detest them when at the short end of the stick life is unfair—we are reminded—the reply quick Afraid we might not get our piece of pie even when offenders repent—apologize never really payback—just a free ride Further rankled when God’s time is not ours trapped--Sylvia Plath in her troubled ‘Bell Jar’ choosing anger over trust—restitution bizarre? How to make right when we have been wronged biblical options rebuffed whilst hate is prolonged perfect fairness not ours to harbor all lifelong God makes things right in His way and time ‘vengeance is mine’ He reminds – never sublime verdict of iniquity chastened—victimless crime
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Fisher Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 9:15 AM
Very nicely put...fairness is such a tough description from one point of view.
Lawrence Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 2:07 AM
I like the rhythm crafted in this. You drummer you. Lovely.
Hicks Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 12:19 AM
Am blown away here... especially by the second stanza. We always seem to wanna be rewarded when we do something good, and think we've been duped if we're not. In reality we are rewarded (just not always in the way we expect it)... you sure do pack punches in your pieces!
Andresen Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 10:27 AM
- We'll do the best we can ...... (right or wrong) ...... better, it can not be .. - A very well written poem, Kim! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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June 12, 2013 at 9:59 AM
So. Much. Truth. Massively thought-provoking. Fantastic job!
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