Inherited Traits

John had his mom’s eyes
Inherited her kindness --
Keen sense of humor
 
Sweet sister-in-law
They shared love for animals --
She and I still close
 
Never met father
John tried to avoid his fate --
Died young like his dad
 
 
 
*Entry for Dr. Ram’s “In-Laws” contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Freeman Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 8:05 PM
Carolyn, Great Gob on this honored presentation, Fisher-Lady, Smile. Gaape, Moses
Brown Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 10:14 AM
Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Horne Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 12:01 PM
Beautiful, but so sad. Many congrats, my friend : ) Hope all went well x
Neels Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 9:59 AM
Hey there Carolyn, congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest ;) all the best for your appointment.. Love Wilma
Long Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 8:46 AM
congrats on your win.. cory
Mannan Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 5:29 AM
Sad and very lovely. many congrats Carolyn for this win.
Osita Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 1:06 AM
Sad but wonderfully writen.Many congrats on your 4th place win.
Dietrich Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 8:51 PM
so sad, Carolyn. Oh, for what could have been! Congratulations on your win.
Song Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 3:23 PM
Great write, Carolyn. It is moves me that your twist to this contest was not silly witty but more reverent. Shows your deep respect for John's family and it touches me deeply! Congrats. Hope u are feeling well this day! A big huggy wuggy for u! (aren't I a corn ball!?) Gwendolen
Mehta Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 3:12 PM
Cogratulations onthe fourth place win in my constest, Carolyn
Neels Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 1:18 PM
I am glad you and John's sister are still close Carolyn.. A beautiful set of senryu for Dr. Ram's contest, love wilma
Foulk Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 12:29 PM
a great piece of fine poetry, thank you for commenting on Two Apples
Poet Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 7:50 AM
Revisiting this touching Senryu .Pl.Visit me Carolyn.
Dufresne Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 5:42 AM
different take on the contest. I like the way you use the contests to bring out the things you want to share. This is indeed a tragic story. Moves me to sadness for those left behind.
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 12:55 AM
I enjoyed this set, CArolyn and how sad about John and his dad.
Locksley Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 3:42 PM
When it comes down to it I think we all try to avoid fate at times. It's wonderful that John's mother and sister were good people. Some of the entries are very funny but this one is moving. Good luck in the contest. Best to you, Diane
Song Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 5:35 PM
BTW...I was the girl in the Monopoly poem...I am the middle child. In case u were wondering. Sure miss my dad! :)
Song Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 5:33 PM
Wow...genetics is often the path of our fate, isn't it, Carolyn. It is a beautiful gift that you can remain close with John's sister--I hope she has his eyes and it will bring u much comfort. Nice idea of Doc's for this contest--not thot of it much-u should do VERY well...if I wrote about my first set of in-laws--America's Most Wanted might find them...ohhhhhh. ha ha. You must have sat in the waiting roooom a long time today to write these 3 lovely poems. At least u had pen and pad in hand.
Horne Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 3:26 PM
A great write on John's family, Carolyn. Very special people.
Kendrick Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 1:24 PM
Good one that speaks well of someone's kin..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Reads like a winning entry..Good luck.Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Long Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 1:16 PM
very nice.. thank you for your comments . good luck in the contest. cory
Onclaud Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 12:09 PM
fond shares about your in-laws, carols... poignantly beautiful... winning wishes to you..:) huggs, nette
Poet Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 12:07 PM
Very moving write Caroline.It touches the heart.Best wishes.My Footle is waiting......
Brown Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 11:53 AM
Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry today Carolyn. It was a very interesting piece to read and the best to you in the contest. My email awaits your medical report if you have it. Love, Carol
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