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Inherited Jawbones

I’ve taken up polishing skulls. Not trophies, just my kin— their sockets still echoing what they aren't ready to hear. Though it's only what they've said themselves. I never knew what reckoning meant however, in terms of preparation, that is, my training for the abrasing escalation of the manner in which they've behaved? That's easy, I crack pebbles now, knuckles before a fight, teeth on a dare—testing hollow sentiments. It's kept me protected, but I will say this: it hasn't attracted many fans.

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Date: 7/7/2025 1:34:00 PM
Sounds like a hobby for which the fans don't lobby!... as revealing as it may be. ~ Gershon
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Date: 7/6/2025 6:51:00 AM
Introspection is heartless. Thank you for this poem. I fight genetics everyday.
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Date: 7/5/2025 10:58:00 AM
Dear Jaymee, your title (love it!) ties you into the familial lineage, that you both revere and satirize, but I didn't fully realize that until I got to your ingenious last line, a layer of irony on top of irony. Your incisive poem bubbles with unresolved issues that pulsate to life with your creative and astounding pen. I adore both the sense of struggle with emotional/generational/familial burdens and the sense of respect/appreciation. Your rich imagery is sharp yet tender, softly critical but intimate.. a truly brilliant poetic creation! Warmest wishes, my soulful poet friend.. ~Susan
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/6/2025 4:49:00 AM
:)
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Susan Ashley
Date: 7/5/2025 5:05:00 PM
That’s what I thought, Tom.. I figured I’d say it for us both :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/5/2025 4:00:00 PM
That's was I was tryna say. Yes'm
Date: 7/4/2025 5:08:00 PM
GAAA! More jawbones. And you're on a warpath so I'm wearing a leather chin strap, thank you
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